Reviews for Long Lost Sister
RedPenWriter13 chapter 8 . 10/5/2012
That letter made absolutely no sense... RPW13
The Invisible Enchantress chapter 8 . 10/5/2012
canʻt wait to see whatʻs next
The Invisible Enchantress chapter 7 . 10/5/2012
Angels dream was scary
ICrySilentTears chapter 4 . 10/3/2012
OMG update please
The Invisible Enchantress chapter 6 . 10/4/2012
i wonder if lily will trust Max.
Good chapter
Darkly Vision chapter 1 . 10/4/2012
Liking it so far!
The Invisible Enchantress chapter 5 . 10/3/2012
oh cliffy
I canʻt wait to see what happens
azebra117 chapter 5 . 10/3/2012
Ugh! I don't like cliffhangers but they make for great stories! This is really really good! aaaaahhhhhhhh what's goanna happen!
The Invisible Enchantress chapter 4 . 10/3/2012
OH MY GODS!
She saw Gaz and Angel. I canʻt wait 2 see what happens
azebra117 chapter 4 . 10/3/2012
It's Gazzy and Angel isn't it? This is really good!
Jazzeegirl chapter 2 . 10/2/2012
In ch 2 aroma of chemicals? Aroma has a positive connotation, in my opinion. You probably should've used a more negative word like stench or at least a neutral word like odor. I'm not trying to criticize, just being helpful.
azebra117 chapter 3 . 9/30/2012
I do enjoy this! Very nice!
The Invisible Enchantress chapter 3 . 9/30/2012
Oooh. cliff.
Keep writing
The Invisible Enchantress chapter 1 . 9/30/2012
hehe
banana peels
The Invisible Enchantress chapter 2 . 9/30/2012
Wow. This is good.
Do continue
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