Reviews for Taste of Paradise
bluerozelovetruth chapter 1 . 8/10/2014
LIKE IT BUT WHY DIDN'T INUYASHA SAY 'I LOVE U' BACK?
LinearCanon chapter 1 . 1/15/2013
Pretty good.
InuyashasGrl26 chapter 1 . 12/24/2012
Good story
Foofynono chapter 1 . 12/20/2012
so kawaii! (cute)
Emiko Kusunoki chapter 1 . 11/6/2012
I thought this was very good,I enjoyed it a lot.
My only problem was a lot of typos, at times i wasnt sure what was going on cause you used the wrong words.I had to fill my own words to make sense.
Also you spelled Kikyo's name wrong. Here you have Kikiyo, in the English they say it wrong all the time so I can see how the mistake is made. I'm a big Inuyasha fan and love accuracy at least with spelling of names.
In all i would love to read more intimate and kinky stories from you.
k.a.a-inu chapter 1 . 10/1/2012
Nice job! Wouldn't have known it was your first fanfic.
Serenity252 chapter 1 . 10/1/2012
it wasnt bad for your first lemon. i got a really vivid image of them in the shower together. way to go!
Yama no Yoshi chapter 1 . 9/30/2012
Make a story or longer one-shot and please add anal too. Great story.
4-G chapter 1 . 9/28/2012
i think you should make a story out of this. good job. -
notcreative7 chapter 1 . 9/27/2012
Ahh poo! I wish this was an actual story instead of a one-shot. Good one-shot, by the way.