HA! Suck it, Bitch, no one messes with the Cordy x Xander ship. No One!

A good way to have things change, and the fact that she still had to deal with them and go in means she does in fact still have that context for later when angel shows up. Question though, how did Xander find the place the demon was from the "brief flashes" of images he got? And could he try the half truth method to mention things? Like "hey, you know that mythical beast with all the heads Herculese caught? Did it have a brother?" Or is it based on intent?

I love that you took the time to stress how far above us his existence is, even if it seemed slightly condescending at times.

Sweet chapter, as far as my human mind can understand I was very amused
Thanks

Is that the Iron Coin or is it an idiot ball for you to force the plot back on the rails ? Waste of time .

I have to admit, I was avoiding this story, but I don't know why I did. This was fantastic! I love that the consequences slowly escalate with every change Xander makes.
I'm looking forward to reading the rest!

This is genius

This was a very well written fic...plotwise. When it came to action scenes there were fights that were just avoided altogether and only the aftermath was shown and that bothered me at little, but not too much. I just wish you had fleshed the fights out a little more. But other than that and a few spelling errors here and there, I thought you did a fabulous job.

All in all I'd give this fic an 8.5/10. Thanks for writing.

What a delightful intro.

Buffy's seen Highlander, she makes a reference to it I think in the first episode of Season 2?

How good is Cordy now thanks to her training with Buffy? I remember on the show Angel he trained her until she was almost good enough to beat him.

I can't see subtlety being very effective against people who live on a Hellmouth. These are people who face death every day.

If Janus isn't either the Hydra or the Jester, it might be best for both of those to form an alliance with him. I can't imagine he'd be much in favor of the plans of Fate.

Hitting some one full strength right in the temple stands a very good chance of killing them. She definitely isn't coming to any time soon if every.

Oh, now that was a dirty cliffhanger. Hope you get the next story out soon.

Will we see Chaos side of the equation as well?