please please please keep writing

Wow, you really know how to stick it to the characters. I like the Jester dude, is he yours? Looking forward to more.

You sir, know how to end on a cliffhanger. I was seriously just kind of casually reading till like the end with Xander's visions. Then I got all hyped up for Xander to figure out to fix this one and before I know it Xander is too late, Faith stabs a guy and the chapter is over... with no chapter 16! TTTT

Interesting stuff. Cordie at the start gets Willow to help save her money, so I figure maybe Skip (or Jasmine) will have to do something drastic soon 'nuff. And Amy I reckon is gonna go bad sooner than she did on the show. But Xander being unable to stop Finch dying was the best part, it'll teach him that he can't save everyone. Hope Faith doesn't go bad.

ouch! l guess it had to happen some time.

I am so confused! Who the heck is the Hydra? Is it related to the Jester in some way? Please explain! :)

Oh poor Xander failed
Hope he tells Cordy the truth and helps faith out
Maybe faith and Amy can go with them when they leave sunny hell

Fun!

Thanks for writing!

Cool stuff integrating Amy with the Scooby Gang. Definite lack of guys in the gang for you to pair her off with; is this gonna be a Faith/Amy 'ship story? I kinda liked how you skipped through the events of The Zeppo, but I wish you had shown how Jack O'Toole escaped from police custody, raised his dead friends and how Xander and Cordie stopped them from blowing up the school. More soon!

Nice to see Willow and Cordy getting along better. I always said those two could be friends if given a chance.

The question being will Cordy ask Willow to help with her dad or let him twist help herself and Xander. Liking this update soon.

Nice chapter, Like how you're making amy more of a real character instead of just an add on. Little lite on iron coin prophacy though.

And, hey they save the wolrd again,yay. It got me thinking though, if the Buffy-verse is in "balance" why is there so many "the world's going to hell" days? Shouldn't there be an equal number of "the world's going to heaven" days?

Huh... I wonder what'll happen now with this story. Ihope you update soon.

I'm also kinda hoping you take Amy out of the picture for a while. I don't really like how she's getting to be the star of the story for this arc, when she's only a recurring extra in canon. But hey, your story, your rules I guess.

Cool stuff with killer Amy and Xander talking to the Jester, hope the next chapter comes quick

I see what you did there, and I resent being reminded of this most heartbreaking episode. [*brushes away tears*]
Are you going to replace Mayor's-girl-Faith with Mayor's-girl-Amy? Cuz that would suck for Amy, but it's not that far of from what the writers did to her over the series.