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sholtsclaw698 chapter 4 . 5/30/2013
loving his point of view, i hope you continue it :O)
sholtsclaw698 chapter 2 . 5/30/2013
love Edwards view.
Loveforgreeneyes chapter 4 . 5/11/2013
I enjoyed your story and the outtakes. It would be cool to read a JPOV. He must be awesome to not be threatened by Edwards love for Bella. Stephanie
Jane3105 chapter 4 . 5/1/2013
So, so sad...but fantastically written
larin20 chapter 4 . 2/11/2013
Why can't I quit you?
i.luv.twilight2 chapter 4 . 2/10/2013
This chapter left me in tears. You can feel the grief rolling off the words. Great story.
Marie One chapter 4 . 2/9/2013
It had to be done, Jasper did die and now we know the facts.
Alice's White Rabbit chapter 4 . 2/9/2013
I figured we would have to get to this part of the story eventually. Doesn't make it any easier, though. Thank God Bella has such wonderful people around her.

I felt so bad for Edward when he thought " Since I met this girl, the only thing I had ever wanted was to have her in my arms, in my bed, and I had it. But I would have given anything in the world to be alone and have her in her own bed next to Jasper." Such a tough position for him to be in. But, he handled it well.


Nicffwhisperer chapter 4 . 2/9/2013
WOW powerful emotional moving chapter. Great writing.
erika shoval chapter 4 . 2/9/2013
Looking forward to read this! Thanks
JustSu chapter 4 . 2/9/2013
Beautifully sad.
Thank you.
ReluctantRomantic chapter 4 . 2/8/2013
What a heartwrenching and perfect last line.

Thank you.
majose chapter 4 . 2/8/2013
What's the saying? Be careful what you wish for. So true...
tigger5600 chapter 4 . 2/8/2013
wow! So absolutely heartbreaking :( Even though we knew this happened it didn't make it any easier reading their reactions :(

debslmac chapter 4 . 2/8/2013
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