Reviews for Pieces
Darth Becky 726 chapter 9 . 4/10
This was great. I'd just re-watched season 10 on Netflix and needed some satisfying angst for that episode. Loved this!
Guest chapter 4 . 10/3/2017
Yeah I'm out Definitely not my type of story and shouldn't of really come up on a tony hurt story search as its not about him and his "injury" gets no focus
Guest chapter 2 . 10/3/2017
I like Tony stories more sorry not a McGee fan and found this in a tony hurt search so kinda disappointed that its gonna be more about mcgee as like gibbs just said Mcgee is clearly worse off although no one knows how bad Tonys head injury really is and just pushing that aside and saying mecgee us worse only because his injury was visable and not just on the inside like tonys is
BCgurlie chapter 9 . 2/21/2017
Loved the ending! Big NCIS family!
brassholio chapter 1 . 9/25/2013
This was wonderful! Your writing seems to flow in a way that makes the story hard to stop reading. Your characterisations are exactly what I like to see in a fanfic, plus not having any glaring spelling or grammatical mistakes jump out at me makes me feel all nice and warm inside :D
starfire25 chapter 1 . 6/6/2013
Wow! Thanks for writing this story! I also was extremely unsatisfied with the time jump in extreme prejudice. So much so that i am writing a fic about it as well. I love your take.
Buzzy chapter 9 . 11/14/2012
Very well done! Nice focus on the three guys as family.
Hermione's Shadow chapter 9 . 11/6/2012
LOL, aww, that was wonderful. I really enjoyed your version of events.
Ivory Pearl chapter 9 . 10/30/2012
I just wanted you know that I really enjoyed your story.
diana teo chapter 9 . 10/23/2012
Well, being a lily-livered coward's a good a reason as any...
LOVED Tony labeling his 'family members', lol... :) The 'father/son' exchange was gulp-worthy, and the 'horny and irresponsible twelve year old' remark was hilarious!
diana teo chapter 8 . 10/23/2012
Liked Tim finally being admitted into the cowboy steak fraternity... ;)
And here I thought the writers were working on improving Tony and Sr's relationship. I wonder what his 'it-had-better-be-a-damn-good reason is...
diana teo chapter 7 . 10/23/2012
Of course Tony was there to watch Gibbs' six. Nice one. Gibbs' thoughts, too.
diana teo chapter 6 . 10/23/2012
Michael the doc, heee... :)
Loved the whole steak conversation!
diana teo chapter 5 . 10/23/2012
To-neeee whu-u-mpppp! Get delicious chills whenever that happens... ;)
Darlin24 chapter 9 . 10/21/2012
oh my lord these family allusions are hysterical "Vance is like the uncle no one is happy to go see" . . . fabulous story, I enjoyed it thoroughly and definitely agree that they "fast-forward(ed)" through too much stuff in the premiere. thank you thank you thank you for putting this up. i have always admired your writing and so I was really excited to read this when i saw it. :)
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