Reviews for Pieces
brassholio chapter 1 . 9/25/2013
This was wonderful! Your writing seems to flow in a way that makes the story hard to stop reading. Your characterisations are exactly what I like to see in a fanfic, plus not having any glaring spelling or grammatical mistakes jump out at me makes me feel all nice and warm inside :D
starfire25 chapter 1 . 6/6/2013
Wow! Thanks for writing this story! I also was extremely unsatisfied with the time jump in extreme prejudice. So much so that i am writing a fic about it as well. I love your take.
Buzzy chapter 9 . 11/14/2012
Very well done! Nice focus on the three guys as family.
Hermione's Shadow chapter 9 . 11/6/2012
LOL, aww, that was wonderful. I really enjoyed your version of events.
Ivory Pearl chapter 9 . 10/30/2012
I just wanted you know that I really enjoyed your story.
diana teo chapter 9 . 10/23/2012
Well, being a lily-livered coward's a good a reason as any...
LOVED Tony labeling his 'family members', lol... :) The 'father/son' exchange was gulp-worthy, and the 'horny and irresponsible twelve year old' remark was hilarious!
diana teo chapter 8 . 10/23/2012
Liked Tim finally being admitted into the cowboy steak fraternity... ;)
And here I thought the writers were working on improving Tony and Sr's relationship. I wonder what his 'it-had-better-be-a-damn-good reason is...
diana teo chapter 7 . 10/23/2012
Of course Tony was there to watch Gibbs' six. Nice one. Gibbs' thoughts, too.
diana teo chapter 6 . 10/23/2012
Michael the doc, heee... :)
Loved the whole steak conversation!
diana teo chapter 5 . 10/23/2012
To-neeee whu-u-mpppp! Get delicious chills whenever that happens... ;)
Darlin24 chapter 9 . 10/21/2012
oh my lord these family allusions are hysterical "Vance is like the uncle no one is happy to go see" . . . fabulous story, I enjoyed it thoroughly and definitely agree that they "fast-forward(ed)" through too much stuff in the premiere. thank you thank you thank you for putting this up. i have always admired your writing and so I was really excited to read this when i saw it. :)
RedLindy chapter 9 . 10/18/2012
This was great, you addressed some of the gaps that were really bugging me. Especially the end-I've been waiting for someone else to notice that no one called for Tony...
Keep writing please, I love to read your stuff.
Lindy
Maunzeli chapter 9 . 10/11/2012
Thank you. You eloquently expressed the way my own mind was running on how they tied up Dearing too fast. Thank you for writing these.
farmgirl1964 chapter 9 . 10/8/2012
Wonderfully done! Thank you very, very much. I enjoyed all of these quite a bit!
Sparkiebunny chapter 9 . 10/7/2012
Only just caught up with the new season, so finally I could read this! Wonderful work, loved your take on the premiere and various scenes. Well done, Xe! :)
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