Great start, can't wait for more

Good as the last one's you mad keep going with it.

Ho ha dark shade is right you have been out of it for far to long all I know is that I'm happy and can't wait for the next chapter oh and jack sounds more badass than ever and I'm sure miko managed to tag along with miko being miko and all that good stuff

You're off to a good start. Can't wait to see the rest. I see you've gone with the classic Unicron, (Moves around the universe eating planet after planet), as opposed to the Unicron they introduced in the Prime cartoon, where he's the seed of planet Earth. I'm very cool with that, and it should be interesting to see how you work that out.

Good start, I look forward to seeing where this goes.

Yaaaaayyyyy! I have been looking forward to a continuation for a while now! So, i repeat, Yaaaaaayyyyyy!