Reviews for Untold Stories
Guest chapter 4 . 7/30/2015
what made you able to write this kind of stuff. this is not a fanfic. this is a real story like the real part of a movie. only one thing I didnt get; one thing I've been seeking; romance; jess and les's romance and some kisses; hee hee
Faust91x chapter 4 . 7/8/2013
So cool!
Faust91x chapter 3 . 7/8/2013
It was very good!
Faust91x chapter 2 . 7/8/2013
Heheh, yeah Jess's just like that, hopefully he learned over time, women can be just as if not better than men at things. And Commander Leslie was fun! Let's duel!
Faust91x chapter 1 . 7/8/2013
Beautiful, simply beautiful, such a great chapter!
Rilawa chapter 4 . 12/25/2012
MadTom chapter 4 . 11/16/2012
Very nice stories. Hope we don't have to wait too long for your next BtT fanfic! Looking forward to it!
richard kayser chapter 4 . 11/15/2012
thanxs for a great read. you did a good job.
manda chapter 4 . 11/15/2012
Their interaction is spot on! And the whole "embarrassed about being beaten by a girl" was hilarious too.
richard kayser chapter 3 . 11/15/2012
very good, sounds like a great battle coming. Now that the 2 are as 1.
richard kayser chapter 1 . 11/15/2012
love it!
G-Matt chapter 4 . 11/15/2012
While I am disappointed that this series is over now, I am excited that you're planning on writing a longer story.
G-Matt chapter 3 . 10/17/2012
Nice chapter and great interaction between Jess and Leslie again.
G-Matt chapter 2 . 10/6/2012
Nice chapter. Looking forward to the second part. And good luck!
MadTom chapter 1 . 9/27/2012
Good story. Hope you have much more to add to this. And don't mention the "tragic incident" at all if you can avoid it!
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