Reviews for Predestined
rmoore7.17 chapter 4 . 8/30/2014
please continue with this please
rmoore7.17 chapter 1 . 4/5/2014
Your still going on with this it's great. I love it.
Stephen chapter 4 . 3/30/2014
Humans were clearly under the impression that they were being invaded by a hostile force. Have them explain that when a dialogue is opened.
RheasHelm chapter 4 . 3/20/2014
This is an excellent story, thank you for posting it. It's fascinating to see the Shanxi incident told from a different perspective.
And you make Tevos quite the interesting character (Although - "Cecillia"? That's a lovely name, but so very Human). What a tortured, broken soul. Makes me wonder how she manages to carry on, with those flashback nightmares and that depressing view of herself. One can only hope that she'll find a measure of happiness eventually (more likely somebody will have to beat it into her).
Funny that you see the Batarians as the Galaxy's provider of cheap consumer goods. I had never taken them for being any sort of economic powerhouse, they just appear to be too xenophobic for that, closed off from the rest of the galaxy. And with their culture of slaving, you'd think that there would be all kinds of sanctions on them.

It is unfortunate that this story has been taking so long - 4 chapters in 18 months is not very encouraging. I sincerely hope that there will be updates in the not-so-distant future, I really would like to see this play out.
metaladdict chapter 4 . 3/20/2014
cool series, looking forward too more
Naginator chapter 4 . 3/8/2014
Nice though hope clash of civilizations is updated soon too
Guest chapter 4 . 2/9/2014
A very interesting and believable story. I look forward to more.
J chapter 4 . 2/4/2014
When will the Salarian councillor become involved in this? What does he have to say about all this?
Peter chapter 4 . 2/3/2014
With the technology from the Prothean outpost on Mars, the humans would probably be equally or more advanced than the Turians in some areas, while still less advanced in others. This fact along with their battle tactics, explains how they were able to force the Turians out of their space.
Stephen chapter 4 . 2/3/2014
Humans Found a Prothean outpost on Mars, which contained half a dozen Prothean ships. Humans could very well have studied the technologies to make their ships more advanced. Which could help contribute to humans effectively fighting back against the Turians.
Peter chapter 4 . 2/3/2014
A mistake here, just because they have a few dreadnoughts, doesn't necessarily mean they have been in space for hundreds of years. Considering the size of dreadnoughts, it would take at least several months to build one.
Stephen chapter 4 . 2/3/2014
In the first chapter of your story "Gaius' ambition", you wrote that it took other races thousands of years to achieve interstellar flight after inventing radio. That's not realistic, because if it did take thousands of years, they would have exhausted all their resources before then. And then they wouldn't be able to achieve interstellar flight. It would be more realistic to say that it took a few hundred years to achieve interstellar flight after discovering radio.
Peter chapter 4 . 2/3/2014
When Cecillia or any Asari meets a human, they will no doubt be taken aback by their Asari like appearance. Humans will be equally taken aback by their human like appearance.
Stephen chapter 4 . 2/3/2014
Considering the conflict, it would be best for them to find a way to communicate with them before trying to make contact.
Guest chapter 4 . 2/2/2014
What a wonderful story! I can't wait to see how Tevos reacts to meeting her first human!
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