Reviews for To practise
Azrael Jinsei chapter 2 . 2/26/2013
Thank you for writing this.
Guest chapter 2 . 11/4/2012
Am not sure what to think of your short story but I can half see where you are going with it. But it needs something, of what am not sure ?

But for now I give you: Two Bronze Stars and hope that you keep trying.

The Crimson Mage.
LikeAMillionParachutes chapter 1 . 10/12/2012
With only 4 reviews I didn't think this would be that good but I was pleasantly surprised. It's a good start and it has me intrigued. I think this could have been expanded and made into a full length story with chapters :P.
Tlcatlady chapter 1 . 9/28/2012
Neat premise...I'd like to see more of this. TLC
Alex chapter 1 . 9/27/2012
interesting why did Dymbles do it?
Guest chapter 1 . 9/27/2012
please conitnue
Guest chapter 1 . 9/27/2012
Mmmmm...I can see where you are going with this but you just didn't make.

Any way, it's not a bad story so I give you: one golden star for trying.

Hope to see more of your work one day soon.

The Crimson Mage.