|Reviews for Vice Collar|
| jeliared3 chapter 28 . 8/17
I am super excited to read more of this fanfic. Actually you helped inspire me to write my own if you like NCIS you should come check it out. I hope the next chapter is done soon.
| Gnildryw chapter 28 . 8/7
Ahhhhh! Please, please, please continue this - this is one of the best stories I have ever read. There is so much drama (gods, I want poor Neal to catch a break), but it's glorious and terrifying and aaaaaah!
So, I really really hope that this story continues - I need to know what happens!
| Vince chapter 28 . 7/17
I love it, please write more!
| Anonymous chapter 28 . 7/14
Just read your whole fic in one sitting. I'm so sorry to hear about what happened to you. I can sympathize because I was suffering from depression some time ago and writing helped a lot. But because of certain people, it's just not the solace it used to be. Luckily I'm at a stage where I'm off the meds and going good. But I don't really want to write anymore. I'm glad that writing in general hasn't been tainted for you even if the fandom has. That said, even though I would love to read more of this work, I do hope that you don't feel pressured to finish it if it's making you regress back to the mental state you were in when you were first writing it. As you've so rightly said, your real life well being comes before the opinion of the bunch of us faceless Internet spectators.
Moving on to my actual review of your story, although the plot at times seemed to spiral out of control, the worldbuilding made this fic amazing. When I first started reading this, to me it was like one of those kinky dub con fics with added plot thrown in. But then as I continued to read, I realized it was so much more than that. Your world building is superb. With relatively simple and easily read language you paint this extremely real and extremely vivid world, and although I said I read it all in one sitting, I would not say that this was an easy read. I mean that as the highest compliment. Nobody said it was easy watching Twelve Years A Slave, and that's a compliment. There were times when I had to just put my phone down for a moment and kinda try not to be overwhelmed by the injustice and despair I felt on behalf of the slaves in this world. You paint a very emotionally real exploration of a premise that most people flimsily use for porn. It's very real, and that means that it isn't very pretty or easy to swallow, but I think that's what makes it so good in the end.
Thank you for sucking me into your world for a good half a day. I think what makes this story so compelling to me is that, in the end, I don't think the mentality of many world leaders today is that far away from the sort of mentality that brings us to this sort of dystopia.
| bearsandharleys chapter 28 . 5/29
Wow! What an amazing world you have created for these characters. I got so caught up in their emotions and feelings and I really enjoy when an author can make that happen. I found you from someone who wrote a story that was inspired by this one, and I am so glad I followed their recommendation. I am sorry sorry you went through what you did but, I am also so glad you were able to overcome the negatives and be able to enjoy life. Thank you so much for deciding to write in this world and sharing your creativity with us. I hhope you decide to finish this story and cannot wait to see how it ends.
| Nano chapter 28 . 5/13
So glad you're writing again!
Can't wait for them to sleep together, it's an amazing story and you are such a talented writer!
| sara chapter 28 . 5/5
So glad you're writing again!
This is by far my favourite white collar fic.
| Yellow Pearl Mi chapter 28 . 4/5
I'm so glad you've started updating this story again. This was my first White Collar fanfic, and it got me into the fandom. I adore the way you write the characters. They're all very real, very intelligent, and very understandable. They have motivations and dreams, and they have regrets and self-loathing moments. I love it. I really hope you do manage to finish this story. It would be a tragedy for it to become a Dead Fic. (Don't listen to the haters and the flames, if you get any more- you're brilliant. And your stories are really hot.)
| greenwings33 chapter 28 . 2/17
Incredibly disturbing, but amazing!(:
| Guest chapter 28 . 2/10
| grey chapter 28 . 2/7
You're mean...you make me addicted to your story...every morning, the first thing that I've done is checking your story, is there any update or not...so please, at least update it once a week.. Thank you..
| Guest chapter 28 . 2/6
Great story Thank you
| ariana chapter 28 . 2/2
Wow, ok..let me digest.. I still can't put it in words... Woah..but why neal do that? It's too cruel..
| CassandraSwan chapter 28 . 2/1
.Gosh! WHAT AN END TO A CHAPTER! I cannot wait for an update. This is so fantastic that I just... need to remember how to breathe again until the next chapter... XD
| MarJan53 chapter 28 . 2/1
I'm not a violent person but I' like to torture the slavers made Neal feel like he is not of value