Reviews for Countdown to Combustion
TheAlpha'sBestGirl chapter 10 . 1/18/2013
I love that Jake's her brother, effectively taking out that awkward circle... But wow- talk about getting it all out there at the beginning... or is there more?
TheAlpha'sBestGirl chapter 9 . 1/18/2013
Sam's a douche and I'd love to punch him in the nose for hurting her like that. Was she pregnant? Is that what the big secret is? Ugh! I can't wait to get to the next chapter!
TheAlpha'sBestGirl chapter 8 . 1/18/2013
Wow- angry Eddie Hot Eddie! That was a great scene. I think maybe he handled it wrong and he should know better and have a better hand on his reactions being a bartender and all, but I'll trust you and see where you take us next!

Is Alice angry? Shouldn't she be more worried about Bella? Sheesh!
TheAlpha'sBestGirl chapter 7 . 1/18/2013
I knew from the title this was going to be a doozy! Lmao... wow... She broke the Mama's Boy's nose. Poor Mike- yet I can't help but think someone needed to bring him down a peg... Lessons... mmmm... Think Eddie will give me lessons? I could use some love from him. ;)
TheAlpha'sBestGirl chapter 6 . 1/18/2013
Ha! The girl can drink Emmett under the table, but gets drunk on benadryl... lol... Priceless... I love that we gotta look inside Eddie's mind. I'd love to see some more from him.
TheAlpha'sBestGirl chapter 5 . 1/18/2013
Aw, Embry is sweet! Too bad she's not interested in him! Lol... But Eddie sounds amazing!
TheAlpha'sBestGirl chapter 4 . 1/18/2013
One word: OUCH! That really sucks. At least they are going to be friends... lol... This made me laugh so hard I woke up the kids early! :D
TheAlpha'sBestGirl chapter 3 . 1/18/2013
Wow... what a first impression... That is not so awesome! I'd be completely, and utterly, beside myself with embarrassment. She handled it with more grace than I would have! Guess she's used to it though?
TheAlpha'sBestGirl chapter 2 . 1/18/2013
Would have loved to have seen something more than just the shopping. Eddie sounds smexy, BB!
TheAlpha'sBestGirl chapter 1 . 1/18/2013
Promising beginning! Love the premise. Sounds likes it going to be hilarious!
prettyflour chapter 14 . 1/18/2013
Oh Bella! Poor Eddie!
ibleedscarletandgray chapter 14 . 1/18/2013
Wow! These two are just so cute - not sure I agree with Eddie wanting to go semi-slow, but the UST is gooooooood!

Not sure what to think about your Carlisle and Esme - more of them would help me to get to know them better!

Thanks for the update - I'm really loving this story - I squee whenever I see an update!
Briandelight chapter 14 . 1/18/2013
Ha ha I had no idea that that was how she was gonna first see his tattoo... I'm gonna freaking die next chapter when he takes his shirt off! Ha ha Bella needs to grow a set... be more bold and be 'that girl' with him... if they're worth it why not right? And Eddie is definitely worth it. God he's damn near perfect, the fact that he trips and falls and takes it in the go-nads like a champ makes him all kinds of amazing. Lol I cant wait!
yellowporscheowner96 chapter 14 . 1/17/2013
Loved it! Keep it coming:)
EllezBellz chapter 14 . 1/17/2013
Great story xxxx
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