Reviews for Mercurial
blackmoon9793 chapter 1 . 4/3/2014
I miss this story so, so much. I know it's been over a year now, but I really hope you continue it someday.
Frust-sheep chapter 4 . 5/25/2013
Oh what a chapter... and especially "next time I make you... fall, there won't be carts- or spectators" was priceless. ;D
Please write more...it's a torture not to know, what will happen next. ;D
*favs it already now* I so enjoyed your writing.
Frust-sheep chapter 3 . 5/25/2013
Every word is so lovely written again and I really love the details. :D Just a wonderful chapter! :)
Frust-sheep chapter 2 . 5/25/2013
Especially these words: "has completely and utterly lost his head over Emma Swan" were brilliant in this context. :D Anyway really wonderful written chapter again. :)
Frust-sheep chapter 1 . 5/25/2013
Oh really wonderful first chapter! :D
blackmoon9793 chapter 4 . 3/17/2013
Just thought I'd beg, plead, demand, solicit, implore, and nag for an update. This is my very favorite Mad Swan story, and I do hope you'll continue it.
The Crownless Queen chapter 4 . 2/3/2013
Great story :p
Anon chapter 4 . 12/17/2012
I love this! This is probably one of my favorite Mad Swan fic. I hope we see an update soon.
Mr. Omelette chapter 4 . 12/1/2012
This is awesome, and shippy, and cute, but mostly awesome! I can't wait for more, so you better update soon okay?
ForEver-A-DayDreamer chapter 4 . 11/30/2012
That's was really good :) I hope u continue and more romance ! Maybe a kiss hehehe or two
DulceDream chapter 4 . 11/30/2012
This is SO beautiful I'm in awe. The way you write is just I cannot stop reading this and falling more in love. I love love how you wonderfully explore Emma/Jefferson AND Charmings relationship with Emma, just seems so natural.
Rashaka chapter 4 . 11/30/2012
I liked this chapter, though it was pretty rough on August's character. I continue to enjoy your use of Henry and Grace, and the idea of both Emma and Jefferson bonding with their children through shopping is a nice image.

How about longer chapters? It feels like there's more you want to say, especially with regards to the other townspeople.
Rashaka chapter 3 . 11/29/2012
Ahh, so good! You've picked a very unusual take on a romantic pairing and I'm completely digging it! Hello, new mental fanon. You've gotten a perfect blend of the madness and zealotry in Jefferson's character with the loyalty, affection, and goodness we saw he has for his daughter. Of course, putting anyone on a pedestal is a dangerous angle for a relationship, but this is Storybrooke and pedestals are pretty much a fact of life for these characters.

It all feels so deliciously old-fashioned and yet scintillating. More please!
Rashaka chapter 2 . 11/29/2012
Dude, this is so AWESOME. I was looking for a believable Emma/Jefferson fic, so THANK YOU. So much. I loved this whole sequence, from the subtle tension and the fear (and their children) all trumped by his unspoken declaration.

I've also got a huge soft spot for scenes where a knight submits to a queen and swears fealty, so this fic is just hitting *all* my fiction kinks. I hope someone bows to Emma over the course of the show; that would be great.
Angels-heart1 chapter 3 . 10/26/2012
Awe! I can't think of anything else to say for some reason, but awe. Such a great chapter. Can't wait to read more!
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