|Reviews for Nornir|
| Guest chapter 22 . 8/31/2013
Its going great ! None of the Kai fanfics I've read have been as good as this one ! Amazing ! :D
| BadmanTing chapter 22 . 8/26/2013
Sorry about the late review, currently on holiday :D
Anyway, this chapter is one of the best in my opinion. Reasons because of Kai and Karls meeting! You even included a little bey battle which is what beyblade is about!
And my last review was answered so that was fantastic.
| SK chapter 22 . 8/25/2013
An awesome plot...keep going..cant wait for the update..bet it will be a fantastic couple of A2 and Kai..! :D :D
| SMRA chapter 22 . 8/16/2013
Loved it.. A letter from tyson, then a beybattle, then some revelations of A2's past.. wow.. 5/5
Anyways, Best of luck for next chapter.. :)
| Seria Arsena chapter 22 . 8/16/2013
Sorry I've been lagging behind on reading! Been busy at my aunt's place...
Having caught up, I feel bad for Linnea a little since Kai didn't actually remember that. And last chapter was really cute. :)
Update soon! (I'll try harder to keep up with updates since I should be able to have more free time now)
| Delirium1015 chapter 22 . 8/15/2013
I find the different ethical approaches interesting here. There seems to be two characters who weigh results heavier than intentions (at least for select events) while the soldier and Karl else seems to see the intentions or the situation as more important. And I love how Kai is essentially in denial over how he feels for A2. He should just admit he likes her. lol
| akin 'to38 chapter 22 . 8/14/2013
I can't stop giggling while Kai ponders over Tyson's letter most esp when he compared the reason behind the letter to what he experienced to A2 (Yay!) It also surprise me of Karl's presence at the Beyblading club that time, not to mention he defeated Raphael so easily (but still not enough to win over Kai. Lol! Just kidding! XD)
About Kai and Karl's talk, it's good to know that A2, despite her cold front, has a big heart. It shows a little more of Kai's concern for her esp now that he knew of a certain suspects intent and he's promise to Karl (which really made me squeal!). And that promise could be put to test now that Laurentiu is coming. (oh no! A2's in trouble!)
| Brillerai chapter 22 . 8/14/2013
The beyblading scene is a nice change of pace. and i didn't know Linnea's name is connected to a flower. i thought that was interesting. I wonder what Elena lost in that accident...
| Shaj95 chapter 22 . 8/14/2013
I have quite a few theories as to why A2 wouldn't want Linnea to know that she's her cousin (apart from the fact that it'll shock her to death :p ) .. And it involves Linnea having told A2 about her feelings for Kai. But i don't want start guessing, cause i dont want to know the truth just yet :p
Apart from that, Elena has ordered for A2's assassination? Will Kai be able to protect her? Very interesting. Please update soon!
| BadmanTing chapter 21 . 8/11/2013
Sorry for the late review, haven't been on ff in a while.
Well anyway, this chapter was certainly interesting... and funny lol. I can't say much tbh, i do wonder why Linnea took them to a theme park even though she is scared of every ride. Sure, it could have been her friends idea but wouldn't linnea have objected if shes that scared? I smell a hidden motive somewhere...
And Kai, he is clueless at buying presents. Funny he got help from A2, hes usually stubborn.
Good chapter 4.5
| Delirium1015 chapter 21 . 8/6/2013
So A2 is an Aries... Why does everything start with an A? A2, Astraea, Asuna...Aries? I'm not complaining but I just thought it was a little funny. And I see that earring cannot be forgotten just yet, huh? At first I didn't understand why you dedicated chapter 8 to it and the three or so chapters after that didn't really explain it's importance, but now I think I get it.
| Keiichi-Keii chapter 21 . 8/6/2013
Yay! Was finally able to catch up on reading!
This chapter has been my favorite! Linnea is just like me! Afraid to go on like every ride. Although I'm not as bad as her. :)
Oh Kai. A keychain? You cheapieeee. I guess I have no room to talk, the majority of my gifts to friends have been homemade. But everyone does seem to like homemade better. Sorry I'm rambling.
Oh! I had a dream involving Kai, Linnea, and A2 the other night. It was the most random thing in the world.
But anyway, can't wait to read the next chapter!
| xXxCometxXx chapter 21 . 8/5/2013
Great story so far - you've kept me on my toes with each chapter and every single time the story progresses, it gets better and better! I'm absolutely fascinated to find out more about A2 as a character - such a complex character, yet I still want to find out more about her.
Just to clear up for this chapter (not to give too much away - as I think I might already know the answer) - is A2 the the first sign? I happen to be really into my astrology and the myths/legends that all go with it myself and I found this particularly fun to read when A2 was forcing Linnea to answer those questions - though the only thing I was slightly confused on was that the 12th one is the sector of the astrological circle which is 330 degrees to 360, yet A2 says she is not the 12th sign?
Other than that - really excellent work! I hope you're proud of it. Keep it up and I'll be looking forward to the next chapter :)
| Brillerai chapter 21 . 8/5/2013
Lol Linnea's scared of every ride...
But those are some hard hints! A2 must have really wanted to make this difficult...I wonder why? And the part where they are shopping for Linnea's present was hilarious. i love how Kai was debating with himsef t ask A2 for advice or not and then she gives him the help he wanted but demandshe thank her and thru all that Kai justl ooks confused.
oh and bad elenea...what is she planning this time?
| SMRA chapter 21 . 8/5/2013
I can't stop laughing over linnea's childish behavior & A2's cold bluntness & Kai's obvious confusion.. the chapter was hilariously awesome.. Awesome.. Hope to get a chance to review again soon.. lol.. anyways, again 5/5.. :)