|Reviews for Nornir|
| Guest chapter 23 . 3/31
Are you still going to continue this?
We missed you :(
| SMRA chapter 23 . 6/1/2014
An awesome chapter.. woww.. Linnea's thoughts.. just wow.. As always, 5/5.. Dont think I'm lazy.. Or shy for that matter.. Because if i started typing about how awesome the chapters are & review it, I would either have no words to say or I'd run out of words to say..
| Hellhound2608 chapter 23 . 5/15/2014
AN UPDATE! YESSSS!
Woohoo! I am so glad to read a new chapter from you! Hey you don't have to worry about it! Your writing skills are still incredible! I just love how you put all that humor during the measuring part. Teehee this goes to show that Kai is still human and gets a little uhh... Off.. With those kinds of things X3 I'm glad you made him gentlemanly enough not to steal a glance while they were fiddling with A2's bra though ;) Kai's sense of control is still there. But of course, it's quite difficult to actually control what the mind thinks ;) Poor Kai hahaha (I feel so mean for laughing).
Man I could feel the tension and drama when A2 asked about the flower.. Thanks for maintaining a slow yet steady pace with their realization of feelings though. It makes things more realistic with Kai and A2 denying or at least hiding their feelings and all because of their reserved personalities :3 I like where this is going. You rarely find good KaixOC fics these days that are realistic and not "too forced." Truth be told, I rarely read those because of their tendency to be like that. D: You are actually my most favorite KaixOC fic writer :3 Keep it up! It's time to save poor Linnea! X3
Can't wait for your next update :'3
| BadmanTing chapter 23 . 5/14/2014
An update... An UPDATE... OH MY GOD THERE'S AND UPDATE!
Okay I best calm down now...
I'm so glad you're back! Thank you!
Anyway about the chapter...
Well it's just awesome like usual! Where do I even start?
The costume part was a bit meh... Until A2 was being measured xD Sucks for Linnea, seems to her like Kai and A2 are very close, especially when he chose to leave with A2. Then again... They are getting closer, I can feel it. All those hints, I wonder how long it will take for them to finally admit it. Linnea is definitely having a bad day, and I had those weird feeling from before that maybe something bad would happen to her. I guess we'll have to wait and see. Oh yeh...
Does Kai like big boobs? LOL
| Delirium1015 chapter 23 . 5/13/2014
Oh finally, you're finally back. What happened to you? But I'm glad you updated again. This chapter was long but funny (at least at some parts). Poor Linnea...First the soda...Then the...I feel so bad for her. Why are they targeting her anyway? I know it's been a while but I thought those guys were supposed to be after A2? And Kai...he has the courage to face the toughest beyblading opponents but not the strength to...oh lol.
| akin 'to38 chapter 23 . 5/13/2014
This surely is interesting esp the part where Kai was distracted while Linnea's friend is getting A2's body measure. And the comment! Oh My God! gave me a good laugh! Ha ha ha.. I hope to see more KaixA2 moments but it seems there will be a BIG ACTION coming.. 4.5 for the chapter :)
| Brillerai chapter 23 . 5/12/2014
OMG what took you so long!?
Welcome back anyway :) Just glad you wrote another chapter. and don't worry, your writing skills are still exponentially better than certain lol writers who were around a few months ago.
Anyway, some points/opinions of this chapter:
1. Linnea sure hangs around some...not so smart company...
2. Lol at Milly's drunk friends. Seriously? "friendly home chemistry?"...
3. Poor Linnea. just not her day, eh?
And i'm speechless about the discussion A2 had with Kai. Seemed like maybe she was giving him a bit of a tip thouh. Still can't imagine a world run by robots on unlimited supply of energy...then again...Julius Caesar and Charlemagne prob never thought humans could fly (on planes) or talk using cell phones.
Now why didn't those goons try to get Linnea before she went inside and only tried as she was leaving?
update soon with my answer! xD (pretty pls)
| Shaj95 chapter 23 . 5/11/2014
You have no idea how happy I am to see this story updated. I've been checking for an update regularly since ages! Anyway.. the story is back on track! Great chapter. No need to worry about how its written. I like the hints coming from Kai and A2 about their feelings for each other. Also like the way A2 is opening up to others. Things really don't seem to be going Linnea's way. Will she be rescued? Can't wait! :) 4.5/5
| Guest chapter 22 . 8/31/2013
Its going great ! None of the Kai fanfics I've read have been as good as this one ! Amazing ! :D
| BadmanTing chapter 22 . 8/26/2013
Sorry about the late review, currently on holiday :D
Anyway, this chapter is one of the best in my opinion. Reasons because of Kai and Karls meeting! You even included a little bey battle which is what beyblade is about!
And my last review was answered so that was fantastic.
| SK chapter 22 . 8/25/2013
An awesome plot...keep going..cant wait for the update..bet it will be a fantastic couple of A2 and Kai..! :D :D
| SMRA chapter 22 . 8/16/2013
Loved it.. A letter from tyson, then a beybattle, then some revelations of A2's past.. wow.. 5/5
Anyways, Best of luck for next chapter.. :)
| Seria Arsena chapter 22 . 8/16/2013
Sorry I've been lagging behind on reading! Been busy at my aunt's place...
Having caught up, I feel bad for Linnea a little since Kai didn't actually remember that. And last chapter was really cute. :)
Update soon! (I'll try harder to keep up with updates since I should be able to have more free time now)
| Delirium1015 chapter 22 . 8/15/2013
I find the different ethical approaches interesting here. There seems to be two characters who weigh results heavier than intentions (at least for select events) while the soldier and Karl else seems to see the intentions or the situation as more important. And I love how Kai is essentially in denial over how he feels for A2. He should just admit he likes her. lol
| akin 'to38 chapter 22 . 8/14/2013
I can't stop giggling while Kai ponders over Tyson's letter most esp when he compared the reason behind the letter to what he experienced to A2 (Yay!) It also surprise me of Karl's presence at the Beyblading club that time, not to mention he defeated Raphael so easily (but still not enough to win over Kai. Lol! Just kidding! XD)
About Kai and Karl's talk, it's good to know that A2, despite her cold front, has a big heart. It shows a little more of Kai's concern for her esp now that he knew of a certain suspects intent and he's promise to Karl (which really made me squeal!). And that promise could be put to test now that Laurentiu is coming. (oh no! A2's in trouble!)