Reviews for Kaptita en Tempo
ShadowedFang chapter 8 . 12/5/2012
Things are heating up... in more ways than one. I hope that Dusk does not go on a killing spree. There are a few people that I would not mind him getting rid of, but certainly not the entire circus.
Tippi chapter 7 . 12/3/2012
Sad. What's going to happen when everyone wakes up tomarrow and finds Marie has passed away?
BlackFeathers 17 chapter 7 . 11/30/2012
Where is the rest!"/$%?&*()_)(*&?%$!"/$%?&*%$%?&&%$/"!""/$/"!"$%?&* ££ it cant end here!
Skylar the Swifthearted chapter 7 . 11/20/2012
Nice job. For such a good story, you have so little reviews. So I'll review this chapter and try to review the new ones :D
Hope you update soon!
maltese chapter 6 . 11/8/2012
You should put a line break when the scene changed, you know? It's kinda confusing at first..

Anyways, I like this! Update soon! :D
ShadowedFang chapter 6 . 11/7/2012
We are what we choose to be... regardless of the circumstances. Both chapters were well written, as always.
MissChair8 chapter 4 . 11/6/2012
This is a awesome story. And does clockwork look like his kid form?
Guest chapter 4 . 11/3/2012
A cliff hanger... Please update soon
Sammi chapter 4 . 11/1/2012
Awww 3 I love Nocturne for bringing Clockwork into the pool P
FrostBitten Snowdrift chapter 4 . 11/1/2012
Still awesome, still brilliant writing, still one of my FAVS
Also thanks for mentioning me, I hardly get any recognision for ANYTHING
TenebrisCor chapter 3 . 10/19/2012
I love this story so far! It is a very unique idea :)

Thank you for the time that you have spent writing this
maltese chapter 3 . 10/17/2012
I think Clockwork and Nocturne gave out too much information.

And yeah, shouldn't Clockwise knows everything?

But, anyway, this is great and I look forward reading the next one :D
ShadowedFang chapter 3 . 10/17/2012
This story is turning out to be just as good as I knew it would be.
FrostBitten Snowdrift chapter 3 . 10/17/2012
Love the story, but don't u mean Mark if Athena, and if so, ISNT IN SUCH AN AWESOME BOOK?!
ShadowedFang chapter 2 . 10/1/2012
Hmmmm, there were a few minor spelling and grammar errors, but overall this was extremely well written. If you would like I would be willing to become your beta. You have the makings for an excellent story here, I look forward to seeing more from you.
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