Reviews for Unsuccessful
LetMeBeFree12 chapter 1 . 10/25/2012
Very good, I like it. Very short but the fact that it is written so well over looks it. So, keep it up. :)
Eolane chapter 1 . 9/30/2012
Oh. my. God.

First I've found the artwork very beautiful.
And this OS is perfectly right with the drawing (duno if it's the good sentence but...).
Poignancy.
It's my favorite :)

Well done !
Guest chapter 1 . 9/28/2012
I like this concept, and it makes sense. Good idea. Great job, by the way. I just wish it were longer!