Reviews for Unsuccessful
LetMeBeFree12 chapter 1 . 10/25/2012
Very good, I like it. Very short but the fact that it is written so well over looks it. So, keep it up. :)
Eolane chapter 1 . 9/30/2012
Oh. my. God.

First I've found the artwork very beautiful.
And this OS is perfectly right with the drawing (duno if it's the good sentence but...).
It's my favorite :)

Well done !
Guest chapter 1 . 9/28/2012
I like this concept, and it makes sense. Good idea. Great job, by the way. I just wish it were longer!