Reviews for The Mysterious Stranger on the Island
rebelxpunk chapter 3 . 7/5/2013
write more!
Refreshingly Original chapter 3 . 6/30/2013
Did you redo this and add more? Or did you send me snippets again?
Either way, freaking hot. ;)
When do we get more?
Ro.
Jac chapter 1 . 6/19/2013
This is awesome! Love the story!
RenaGraceSx chapter 2 . 4/2/2013
good.
RenaGraceSx chapter 1 . 4/2/2013
Love it. :)
Thisissocliche chapter 1 . 2/17/2013
Oh my gosh, awesome! Update? Pleeeeeeease? Your Sophie is so cute :)
WemmaisWonderful chapter 1 . 1/5/2013
This was really great!
Refreshingly Original chapter 1 . 10/5/2012
Addicted-to-NCIS!
I know I should have done this when I first read it, and I apologize profoundly for not doing so. So to make up for that, I am going to re-read this and write my review as I go.
Here we go.
1. The length AwesomeSauce!
2. The first paragraph was great, especially the description of the mystery woman. ;)
3. Dialogue between the two, sweet. Perfect for Donna.
4. The interaction with Sophie is amazing. (She's such a cutie!)
5. Same as no. 4. :)
6. Loving the beach scene, although I'm not a fan of beaches. ;)
7. And the ending! _._ Are you sure this was meant to have more chapters? 'Cause even though I remember you telling me that there would be more, to me it seems to be a wonderful ending for a one-shot. Just saying. :)
And that's it, because I really need to get to sleep.
Night!
Ro. :P