|Reviews for Salty|
| hhhhhhhhhhhhhh chapter 1 . 4/18/2017
i thought that you had both great descriptive smut and great emotions. i could almost feel the humiliation Syaoran was experiencing through your incredible writing. this was great!
| Levy'sbookshelf chapter 1 . 3/7/2015
I think this has both descriptive smut and emotions!
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/30/2014
Everything right and nothing wrong kind of glad it was more descriptive ad less emotions, since the focus was smut
| xXxOtAkU-444xXx chapter 1 . 12/3/2014
I like it! poor Syaoran
| BooNat chapter 1 . 4/25/2013
Love it, really good i really wanna know what happens next!
| kuroXIII chapter 1 . 9/28/2012
Honestly, I think you did very well for this non-con. I really wanted to beat those guys up for doing that to Syaoran. D:
In my opinion, a non-con can be almost like a smut story I suppose but what it really needs is to show how the victim (depending on POV) is messed up from losing control of themselves mentally and pysically. You did that very well when Syaoran kept blaming himself even though it wasn't his fault and how he ignored the consequences of what's happening to him as long as he can get something out of it. In a way, that should have been a warning for the others that there is something mentally wrong with Syaoran willing to do anything to get the feathers when they got to the Tokyo Arc.
Hm.. I wonder if the reason Tsubasa didn't take control of Syaoran's body is that his connection to Syaoran was not strong enough since he was breaking out of Fei Wong's prison? Hope the kid isn't too scarred by this (both of them).
| Skittles Pie chapter 1 . 9/28/2012
In my opinion, you should write more :)