Wow! This was just an incredible story. The pictures you paint with words. I'm blown away. The emotions you pulled out of me with this story... I should not be tearing up at the thought of Edward going away... and yet. Well done! BRAVO!

How the hell did I find a 10 year old piece of work this good and just now finding out about it?! This was amazing. I cried when she let Edward go. So, so good. And, Charlie, he was chef’s kiss adorable. Like the kinda dad we all wish we had

Such a beautiful story! Thank you for your amazing Bella!

OMG! So cute! I really love your story!

This is so beautiful and unique and heartbreaking at the same time. This is a HEA, I guess, but not a usual one. More about self love and understanding. But, I kept thinking that Edward would show up until the last paragraph.

Now be honest, you thought if this plot after writing Edward in The Loving Kind, didn’t you? (Haven’t read anything but the summary, just had to comment!)

This was such an interesting story! I can imagine it happens to writers more than we know.
She loved, she learned and she came out of it with such a greater understanding of her own life. What more can you ask?
Thank you for sharing this with all of us.
And sorry it has taken me so long to find this gem!

Awwww, I kept thinking a REAL Edward would show up.

Found this on an old reading list. Still trying to figure this out!

This is so bittersweet. I mean, as I start reading I knew a traditional HEA wasn't going to happen, but it's still very hard to take in.
Thanks for taking the chance to write a story like this, you're amazing! Saludos

Alice and Jasperbetrayal

So like a guy, Jasper. *shakes head*

I can relate to Bella.

This, this is such a powerful ending and omg I want to cry. I really want to cry - scratch that, I am crying.

Thank you for writing.

this story was just so amazing! thank you for sharing it xx