|Reviews for Figmentum|
| Midnight Cougar chapter 1 . 10/23/2012
This story is such an interesting premise...I am intrigued both by Bella's "RL" journey & the one she is creating with her new characters. :)
| Sunshinemommy chapter 1 . 10/23/2012
Oh, wow. What a start! I'm not sure which story I find more compelling - Bella's, or the story she's writing. I found your story from your tease on adf. So glad I decided to read it :)
| melbelle330 chapter 1 . 10/23/2012
I've heard many lovely things about this story, so I gave it a shot. I can't wait to finish this review and start chapter 2!
| Twiggalina chapter 4 . 10/22/2012
I can't wait to read more!
| Twiggalina chapter 3 . 10/22/2012
I'm really enjoying this story!
| Twiggalina chapter 2 . 10/22/2012
| Twiggalina chapter 1 . 10/22/2012
I really like this first chapter!
I haven't read a story for ages that has me disliking Jasper as much as I do in this fic.
| Cici G chapter 3 . 10/21/2012
Breakups are hard but it's good they are ending it before they do resent each other. I look forward to more.
| garddita17 chapter 1 . 10/21/2012
Quite an intriguing beginning. I'm reminded of a fav movie, Somewhere In Time. Not that this story will be like it. Just the idea of falling in love with someone who isn't really there, or are they. I can't wait to see how Edward takes shape and how Bella may or may not begin to interact with this character from her mind.
| ImYours1901 chapter 4 . 10/20/2012
oh god, this story is consuming me.
| Esme Incognito chapter 4 . 10/20/2012
Great chapter, Shell. Loved your vivid description of dawn& dusk and Edward's interaction with Riley.
I hope Bella doesnt isolate herself too much & grow into an old cat lady!
| TwistStix chapter 4 . 10/19/2012
Bella is really starting to disappear into her own head but least Edward is there to keep her company lol. Interesting story that has quickly become one of my favs :)
| Vancouver-Canuck-Girl chapter 4 . 10/19/2012
I love how the two stories are woven together so expertly. How Bella writes at night according to Edward's night shifts. Clever, clever story! Love this so much. Thank you!
| insanemum chapter 2 . 10/19/2012
Aha! Jasper has been revealing his dissatisfaction to Alice. No wonder Bella feels slightly betrayed.
| insanemum chapter 1 . 10/19/2012
This is lovely! On to the next chap...