|Reviews for Figmentum|
| Fiyaaa chapter 3 . 10/26/2012
Brilliant chapter :)
I loved Bella's talk with her father, you can't suppress creativity and compromise so much, you lose who you are.
Loved it x
| edwardcu77en7over chapter 5 . 10/26/2012
Awww! How sad it is that she finds the one who truly belong to her only in her dreams... I wonder if that would be considered immature or foolish romantic :/
Still, my heart aches for Bella and her loneliness
| Fiyaaa chapter 2 . 10/26/2012
Not just-fucked hair, please." - I bow down to you for that :)
Brilliant chapter! x
| Isao84 chapter 5 . 10/25/2012
When is Edward going to actually appear as in her real life?
I know i know
That's part of the plot but at least tell me we are getting warmer or something?
| whohellanoes chapter 4 . 10/25/2012
Whoa there at the end. What is she gonna do now? Can't wait to see what you do. Thanks so much.
| Twiggalina chapter 5 . 10/25/2012
| Cared chapter 5 . 10/25/2012
How fabulous that Edward has become so real to Bella, that she dreams of him.
| Cared chapter 4 . 10/25/2012
Even I felt that Edward kissing Rosalie was wrong LOL.
| Rita01tx chapter 5 . 10/25/2012
Bella must feel like she's going crazy, but I've read more than one author swearing the characters seemed to stand at their shoulder dictating their story as they were mere conduits!
| Guest chapter 5 . 10/25/2012
Keep Writing! Can;t wait to read more.
| Rebadams7 chapter 5 . 10/25/2012
Afraid to remember
Driven to forget
Penning a wistful fantasy
A metaphor for life
Written in the stars
Living life inside
Another kind of bars
| callmepagliacci chapter 5 . 10/25/2012
Aw, shit, Shelly! What are you doing to me, here?
I found myself wishing I had come up with this idea... well, many times since I read your premise. I doubt I could do it justice, however.
I'm loving your mermaid-water/narrator-writing analogy.
And now, my revieku for Chapter 5:
She writes, home, alone,
A bed too big, mind too full
Dreams- a green-eyed man.
| quoideneufj chapter 5 . 10/25/2012
Definitely still reading!
| TwistStix chapter 5 . 10/25/2012
Powerful chapter! The writing felt very fragmented and reflected Bella's current life perfectly. I presume that is what you were trying to convey. Not sure how the mermaid story will ultimately relate to Bella if at all. She does feel pressure from the mother to be more social and "normal" and in a way I guess she is scared to continue her Edward story. But will Bella eventually choose Edward over her current reality. You've really got me guessing with this story and I love it :)
| MissWinkles chapter 4 . 10/25/2012
You can feel the palpable wrongness between Edward and Rose. It's forced and weird. Plus she bring hand sanitizer on a date.
But then - - he's DocWard, And not just any old Doc A KIDS DOCTOR. *FLAIL*