|Reviews for Figmentum|
| Gingerandgreen chapter 5 . 10/24/2012
"it is still Edward who haunts my dreams." - yeah, me too. LOL. Looking forward to more of this.
| Livie79 chapter 4 . 10/24/2012
There are so many things that I could comment on with this chapter, but I can't stop thinking about her being unable to write them kissing. OMG, where are you going with this crazy woman? I need to know all the things!
| Livie79 chapter 3 . 10/24/2012
I really like Charlie! GAH! LOL. I need to like a Charlie right now! And God, this Bella, I feel her SO much. I know that feeling of getting lost in your head, forgetting everyone and everything and none of it in intentional. Sigh. Also I love how she is struggling to write ExR. It makes me giggle!
| Livie79 chapter 2 . 10/24/2012
I'm loving this structure you're using to write. It's probably the only fic that I've seen done like this! And if I have seen it before it wasn't done well enough for me to remember. But this...this I will remember. And poor BxJ..they're doomed. I feel it in my bones, LOL. Onward!
| Gingerandgreen chapter 3 . 10/24/2012
I guess what Jasper's really saying is he'd rather have Alice? Poor Bella. ;) Your characters are too real for their own good.
| Livie79 chapter 1 . 10/24/2012
Holy cow dude, your writing is BEAUTIFUL. You certainly have a way with words, and I'm intrigued where you are going with this. I can relate to this Bella SO much, anyone who writes can. I can't wait to dive in!
| Seagull83 chapter 5 . 10/24/2012
This fic really is genius. It has such a clever premise and I can't wait for the "real" Edward to come along (assuming that's what happens).
| LMDyn chapter 5 . 10/24/2012
It's very rare to find original stories, where you have absolutely no idea how they are going to unfold, and this is definitely one of them. I keep trying to guess if he's going to live only in her mind, or if he's going to somehow magically appear, of if maybe he's a boy that she doesn't fully remember from her childhood... I'm loving it! To top it off, your writing is incredibly good, and it keeps getting better. Can't wait for the next chapters!
| Gingerandgreen chapter 2 . 10/24/2012
You are going to have so many writers following you. This all rings so true.
| Gingerandgreen chapter 1 . 10/24/2012
This is just beautiful. So poignant. Thank you so much for writing and sharing this.
| Bow to your sensei chapter 5 . 10/24/2012
This continues to be amazing! Thank you!
And oh - lol, mermaids. Isn't that what SM says her next magnum opus is about? ;)
| TiramiSue84 chapter 5 . 10/24/2012
There you go increasing my crush on your story again!
Though I'm happy about the progress in this chapter I have to admit that I also feel sorry for Bella being pulled all over the place in this one. The returning feeling of loneliness, her mother more or less forcing her out of comfort (which isn't necessarily a bad thing, i know), then her disobeying characters, Edward invading dreams, realizing that she fell for him, her fruitless attempt of letting him go... gah!
Also-and maybe that's just or me and the fact this story is canon (kind of?)-but I can't get rid of the feeling that there is/will be something happening between Jasper and Alice... I'm not saying that he cheated on her, but some things just feel fishy to me.
(Wait for my awesome transition here...) Btw fishy- I loved Nettie's/Tallulah's tale! So cute. ;D
I know it is kinda ridiculous since we are only 5 chapters into this story, but my mind is on overdrive atm so bear with me, but I'm really wondering how this whole Bella/Edward thing is going to happen. My little, sappy, hopelessly romantic heart wants for him to materialize out of thing air and knock on her door to sweep her off her feet, or maybe she one everning decides to have a drink in a bar where she coincidentally takes the seat next him. lol. But then I think -maybe that's not at all how this story is going to turn out. What if Edward will only ever live on paper and in her dreams, leaving Bella to only ever be able to see and feel him when she sits down to write or dreams?!
Either way, I'm sure it's going to be beautiful (and probably a bit heartbreaking! Or A LOT heartbreaking if you lean more towards the second option with this!) ;D
Loving this so, so much!
Thank you for sharing and good luck for your exam! Go, ace it!
| Sunshinemommy chapter 5 . 10/24/2012
I love this story! Really, I do :) It's refreshingly different, beautifully written, and intricately detailed without being wordy or repetitive. Very well done! Thank you for sharing :)
| BellaCullenPR chapter 5 . 10/24/2012
NGL this story is frustrating me but I really like it.
I guess that I'm curious & masochist so I keep waiting updates LMAO
| bigblueboat chapter 5 . 10/24/2012
So much heartache is given to Edward; he deserves to show up in Bella's dreams as a break from his dreary life.
Please tell me that Edward exists and is a dream-walker. Not sure why I feel that should be the solution, but it works in my mind right now.
I also love the idea of the mermaid book. If only people would figure that out that moral for themselves in their early teen years as opposed to later in life, I believe a lot of heartache would be eliminated.