|Reviews for Figmentum|
| SunflowerFran chapter 3 . 10/11/2012
I think this is a good move for Bella...she is in a different place than Jasper and she needs to find her place before she can be with someone.
Love her talk with Charlie...tells us a lot about how she got to be how she is...and where it came from.
| edwardcu77en7over chapter 3 . 10/11/2012
I'm gkad things are over with Jasper, he was such a douchebag to Bella and just gave her a chance when he was horny... I don't pity him at all!
I loved Bella's relationship with her dad! That was lovely to read :)
So why people call her Bea?
By the way, I'm glad Edward and Rosalie are not into eachother even in her mind LOL The picture of them together feels so wrong to me, hahaha!
| Guest chapter 3 . 10/11/2012
I saw a lot of parallels in this chapter and I think that is a good thing. I am constantly amazed that you are so good at writing a story within a story. You are giving glimpses of Bella's writing her story about Rose and Edward. I feel like Edward and Rose are very similar to Jasper and Bella. They don't have "chemistry". However, Emmett and Rose have had chemistry but that didn't work out for one reason or another. I do love the friendship between Rose and Irina. Edward has friends too. I am not surprised that Jasper and Bella ended things. At least it was on the positive way. I'm kinda scared by what happens when and if Jasper and Alice get together. That could be tricky because they are all friends. Should I be worried if Bella isolates herself to her writing and her home? I love the father/daughter relationship with Charlie and Bella. They are similar in more ways than I expected. Thank you for sharing your talent with us. I look forward to more.
| jansails chapter 3 . 10/11/2012
Oh, thank goodness, I was really getting frustrated with Jasper's annoyance & irritation with Bella.
And it would not surprise me if he has already cheated, if not physically, then with his heart, his feelings.
I do like it Bella did not crumple, become weak & pleading with Jasper.
I think Jasper's ego wanted that, because he partly feels Bella would have changed if she truly wanted him, above all.
| LuluC chapter 3 . 10/11/2012
I like your people a lot here. They seem very fresh and non-cliched, which is so awesome.
| Guest chapter 3 . 10/11/2012
I guess most of us are avid readers who are prone to getting lost in whatever story we are into so we can probable all relate to this situation.
| Plaidpantz chapter 2 . 10/10/2012
-another excellent chapter! My husband and I love Barolo too!
| Plaidpantz chapter 1 . 10/10/2012
Wowza! Fabulous! - can't wait for more!
| TwistStix chapter 2 . 10/10/2012
Part of this story is unnerving. My husband often wants me to join him watching a movie but when a great fanfic has me I can't put it down :)
| TwistStix chapter 1 . 10/10/2012
Recc'd on RA. Lately I find myself looking for stories that are a bit different, push the envelope so to speak. I find your premise intriguing and I like that I have no idea how this is going to pan out :)
| Raggdolly chapter 2 . 10/9/2012
Lovely chapter. There are things I wanted to say while I was reading, but I've long forgotten what they were. I need to start writing this down. Anyway, I enjoyed it.
| callmepagliacci chapter 1 . 10/9/2012
Beautiful. A really incredible first chapter.
| dreaminginnorweigen chapter 2 . 10/8/2012
I love your words, Beebs!
| Cici G chapter 2 . 10/8/2012
It's funny that Bella can't get them Rose and Edward to move forward. It's something when two people just don't have the chemistry. I look forward to more.
| Cici G chapter 1 . 10/7/2012
I'm enjoying this story and I really look forward to seeing what Bella decides to do with her real life since it seems that she has always gone with the flow and whats easy. I do understand the getting lost in words I have always had a problem with it as well.