Reviews for The New Baker
Brenda chapter 4 . 12/2/2012
Helloooo! Really, really good fanfic! I love it! Keep on going :)
AppropriateAsAlways chapter 1 . 11/22/2012
I'd say this plot line has potential, but I'm unable to enjoy it in light of all of the grammatical errors and spelling issues. E.g. Benjimen should be Benjamin, barken mad should be barking mad, and Tirpin should be Turpin. I suggest that you get a beta reader.
DollyDaydreamer chapter 3 . 10/19/2012
Finally got round to reading this! I really like the plot and where the story is going but you need to work on your spelling and grammar, some of the mistakes make it quite hard to read. Take a minute to read over the chapter before you post it or maybe get a beta. Apart from that it's really good, I like Arrin and the way she is developing. Don't give up on this one, I think it will be really good :)
BookwormStrawberry chapter 2 . 10/3/2012
Poor Girly... Love is so weird.
Malfoygirl18 chapter 2 . 10/3/2012
OMG! I loved this chapter! Great job!
Malfoygirl18 chapter 1 . 9/30/2012
OMG I love it so far! Please continue! I wanna read what happens next! :-)