Reviews for Trunks bad Day
HopelessRomantic183 chapter 4 . 3/27
Lol, loved it! So, is it really Trunks' bad day or Vegeta's?...or both? Then again, at this rate, all the boys are probably going to get severely punished by their mother's/wives, for one thing or another when their escapades are eventually discovered! -I'm sure that even if the guys agree that the day never happened Vegeta's run in with the cops will still make the news, at least, and the story's not even over yet!
vegeta1230 chapter 1 . 9/18/2014
wow
xDarkStar1810x chapter 4 . 8/19/2013
Update please! :)
crystalWaters chapter 1 . 12/26/2012
um it's good but spelling and grammar work on please...
Dead account no longer here chapter 3 . 10/7/2012
It's a little hard to read. Can u space it out? Anyway, it's okay so far
bluedreamer0802 chapter 3 . 10/6/2012
great story :)
Super Vegetarott chapter 1 . 10/6/2012
It's sad how many people are illiterate these days.
Full Power chapter 2 . 9/30/2012
Space it out...this is actually really funny though!
Potential-Overlord chapter 2 . 9/29/2012
ahahaha this is hilarious, but can you please watch the language? i love vegeta! yesh but dont you think vegeta would approve of trunks behavior? i do but you dont have to listen to me! XP
crashbreaka chapter 2 . 9/29/2012
Do you reckon you could separate the sentences instead of having them as one massive paragraph? It just makes it easier to read.

Other than that this certainly made me laugh. I can't wait for the next chapter!
icevomp chapter 1 . 9/29/2012
It's ok story for now 6/10 :)
bluedreamer0802 chapter 1 . 9/28/2012
Oooooooo what will Vegeta do next..
I can't wait for the next chapter...xD :))