Reviews for Melody
AntaresTheEighthPleiade chapter 1 . 9/29/2012
Soooooo cute! I can very much see this happening, oh yes I can. You captured the backdrop of their lives- the sickness, the machine, the attitude towards mensch, all that- absolutely perfectly, and the background information only added to the story. Not to mention that you captured young!Alfred so well. I can totally see him like this as a teenager. And the fight with Ivor... yeah, from what you hinted about Ivor's personality, I think that the fight (and its 'resolution') totally fits him. He'll be so pleased when he learns that his buddies have gotten together- he'll probably tease poor Coren shamelessly. :)
And this is *dedicated* to *me*?! That's... so cool! I'm grinning like an idiot (good thing my roommate's not here) just at the thought of it. Thank you times ten thousand!