|Reviews for Kaminari to Mizu|
| Miss Hectic chapter 10 . 3/11
Wow! Hinata bow and arrow. Suddenly, Kantis Everdeen in "hunger games" fully my mind.
| pgonzale5 chapter 17 . 3/7
I hope you pick this story up soon, I've enjoyed it immensely! ]
| wakamine chapter 17 . 2/2
update more pleasee :3 i really love ur storyyy
| samy.reales1 chapter 17 . 1/31
I can't stop reading! Soo gooooddd! Please continue...one of the best, if no the best story i've ever read...i like the way you write, just hope you continue the story! Love it
| Milla chapter 17 . 1/26
The plagiariser has withdrawn the fic now, but keep an eye out for "ExoShidae" - he/she might try again.
| Milla chapter 17 . 1/26
I love this story and hopefully you'll update it soon. I want to see Hinata get her revenge on her awful clan and *shudders* rapist husband.
Just to warn you: this story has been plagiarised by another writer, who has posted it as "Twisted Reality". I've already reported it to and I don't think you need to worry about it, but I just wanted to give you the heads up.
Best regards :)
| miaandB chapter 17 . 1/27
| chibispark chapter 1 . 1/19
I don't know if I'm being rude but after I've read your story I was really disappointed because now I cannot look at other sasuhina fics. You've done something that I cannot choose a word to describe but I want you to know that it is more than loving it and craving for it. Anyway before I loose my sanity on how good you are please if you have time update.. I'm not going to have the same sleeping habit ever again..oh and another..from now on if you found a fic that interests you.. can you recommend in to me..thank you for everything..oh another one I personally love your title and the slow development of it and all of it to make it short..and last.. don't worry about the long chapters its totally fine, in fact, the longer it gets the better, more to read
| Ermilus chapter 17 . 1/16
Great story just u update sooner
| Guest chapter 17 . 1/14
Ok, this story is amazing :D I love how you write about the perspective of other characters. This makes it flow and let the plot run smoothly (in my opinion). I also love the steady interaction and relationship development with Sasuke and Hinata! I love this couple XD Keep up the great work! :)
| HolyCowNipples chapter 17 . 1/14
| rayningnight chapter 17 . 1/2
Oh my. This is... wow. Amazing. Your other SasuHina fic was fantastic ("Haunted by the Uchiha" I believe it was called. Did you delete it? I hadn't finished it, I don't think...) and this is definitely keeping up the expectations. I love the way you portray the characters - not immediately likeable, but certainly in character, until they slowly mellow out to what you want them to be. Sasuke would never be saying half those cheesy lines if not for that gradual character growth, and I applaud how smoothly it happened (not as smoothly as some fics, but certainly better than the majority of the fanfics out here...). Your writing style seems to jump from flowy to choppy however, and that kinda irks me. Sometimes I feel like I need to skim a few bits of too-detailed writing, and then I realize I missed something important. So... just watch out when putting too many large, simultaneous paragraphs. Add some one-liners or one-sentence(r)s between the massive descriptions or something if it's kinda important.
Finally, to conclude my review, I have to give a Kudos to you. This was amazing, and though I find the villain a bit frustrating (is he just a cookie-cutter bad guy? Does he even HAVE a motivation other than 'Orochimaru'-like science or is this some intricate revenge plot that I can't/won't be able to understand as of yet?) since I can't tell if he's... well, someone we KNOW with the way Naruto was talking about him before.
Oh! I'd also like to ask something - maybe this was already mentioned, but I forgot or I've missed it - but whatever happened to Tsunade? Or is she dead...? And whatever happened to Jiraya? Is he just spying around out of the village or somethin'?
PS: Just saying this out of personal opinion, but why do you seem to always make Hiashi such a butthole? In the manga/anime, he's distant, and pretty apathetic, but he has good intentions for his family. Like, he didn't mind Hinata being weak, actually, just as long as she had motivation and actual drive for success and always tried her hardest as someone in her station. That, and in this story, he almost seems like a cut-black/white uncaring!father type, and it kinda irks me. He's not like that! He cares! Why else would he care so much for his brother and nephew? It's strange he would care for Neji MORE than Hinata, his blooded daughter... just saying.
PPS: But, on to leave on a lighter note, THIS WAS FREAKING AWESOME. Can't wait for the next update!
| 18Madison81 chapter 17 . 11/28/2013
Wow, I only came to check up how you were doing with your stories but then, I decided to check this one out.
Almost immediately, I was hooked! xD
Nice to see you doing well, I'll be following this story from now on. I just adore SasuHina,
| SasuHina 3 chapter 17 . 11/27/2013
Please update! I'm begging you! This is the best SasuHina story I have ever read! I NEED to see what is going to happen!
| vincent1875 chapter 17 . 11/5/2013
The Amekage(stupid term since there's only 5 true kage) is obvious. Satoshi is either Kabuto or Orochimaru. I'm betting Oro.