Reviews for The Life of the Shallow-Minded
LedaMuirBunnie chapter 1 . 12/4/2012
Well., STANDING OVATION., Seriously :o You've OutDone YourSelf, From Poetry To This., Well Done :D There Was So Much Detail In This I Really Liked It :3 It's Really Really Good, You Should Be So Proud _
xox
Amakatsu chapter 1 . 10/22/2012
I loved, where did you read the manga?
The detail was great, a perfect back story for her. I like the way it was written. Very well done indeed
StormyMonday chapter 1 . 9/29/2012
I love the anime, but haven't been able to get my hands on the manga yet. Real life, and all that jazz. Having said that, this was quite a nice read. You captured so much hopelessness and emotion in so few words, and I say major kudos for that. :D

A couple of minor issues should be addressed, however. One is that there seem to be a few missing words here and there, although going back I can't seem to find them. Go figure. :/ The second is numbers. I find that a story flows better if the author writes the actual words, unless of course you're addressing something very technical, like pi. :P

Otherwise, well done! -hearts-