Reviews for The New York Marathon
Bigboy3264 chapter 1 . 2/2/2013
WOW, so funny! love it :)
BeTheIntegrity chapter 1 . 12/28/2012
Loved this story, it's such a sweet flashback wish the show would add something like this sadly I don't think we'll ever see it, so thank you for giving us a glimpse at what it'd look like.
Keep writing and write some more fictions :) xoxo
may chapter 1 . 10/2/2012
so freakin sweet. i really hope season 2 has flashbacks because this needs to be in it
thank u
(write more ha!)
Jo chapter 1 . 9/29/2012
It was a great first story. Really sweet!
LoveMeryl chapter 1 . 10/1/2012
Love it! I smiled like an idiot when he called her his girlfriend! Please write more!
bluecube76 chapter 1 . 9/30/2012
Great, absolutely loved it.

Please write more will & Mac fic's. ;)
Kazbot chapter 1 . 9/29/2012
More please! :D
inothernews chapter 1 . 9/29/2012
Yayy I love will/mac fluff! This fic was super cute and awesome! Great job :D
Kronoskingofthemonkeypeople chapter 1 . 9/29/2012
Yay! You did the marathon prompt! And listen, this is great work for a first fic! Love the fact that Mac thinks she can do a 26 mile race without ever doing exercise - and love how you flipped it at the end to make it the inciting incident for Will to ask Mac to move in.

But now since you've proven your writing abilities - it's time to write more! That's right, get suckered in with the rest of us! MWAHAHAHAHAHAAHA
Kazters chapter 1 . 9/29/2012
Oh loved this :) you captured there banter and I like the use of billy to get his attention hope you write more
millie.zhang chapter 1 . 9/29/2012
great! Enjoyed your writing very much!