Reviews for After the storm, Through the rain
matthew42 chapter 2 . 11/5/2012
yes i do like it, im also an experianced noobie writer and ill tell ya that if at first your story is ignored do what lady gagag does. make it extreamly supriseing so ppl will flock to see it.
thats my word of wisdom. hope it helps.
also if that dont work you can jsut treat the story like edgar allan po does, write it only for your own amusment and have ppl phraseing it be a bonus
Matthew42 chapter 1 . 10/21/2012
oops, its lucy not luvy XD woops, butter fingers
Matthew42 chapter 1 . 10/21/2012
my choice would be luvy saveing them, it would be emortifying if they both got killed.
NinetailsYoda chapter 1 . 10/7/2012
When lucy was intraducing herself to the parents you should have just put "I'm just a friend of Kaete."

instead of saying:

"The only reason we are here is because I am taking her away, and before you can ask no I am not child services, I am just a traveling stranger running away from her past. And now I understand why she ran away."

They dont need to know that it was a waste of space and no one would say im running from my past without it sounding mysterious or a feeling that person doesen't want to talk about it.

Sorry for talking this so long just thought you could use the help.