Reviews for A Promise Broken
ShortySC22 chapter 1 . 10/14/2012
Aww the ending was so cute. Loved this little story.
Striders-Girl89 chapter 1 . 10/8/2012
*Sobs* *Wipes tears from swollen eyes*

I only watched this episode last night. I was dreading it. To me, this piece of wonderful writing should have been in the episode. It is very beautiful.

On an unrelated note; I think Steven Moffat should be banned from writing characters that go onto the roof of a building. Just a thought...
Sylva Dax chapter 1 . 10/2/2012
It was all I could do not to weep with Brian.
seiryux chapter 1 . 10/1/2012
So beautifully written and so heartbreaking...
Jess chapter 1 . 9/30/2012
I'm loving your Brian/river interactions!
JaneScarlett chapter 1 . 9/29/2012
Ohh. I loved this. Thought I'd cried myself out watching the episode, but clearly not...
Lindsay Lee Wells chapter 1 . 9/29/2012
This is just what I need as I try and recover from Steven Moffat's emotional trauma. Seriously. The only constructive criticism I have is how River calls Brian "grandfather." It seems too... formal. Maybe in the beginning of the story works, but it would of ended nicer if she had said, "No, I'm staying with you, grandad." That would have sounded more like how she actually talks, and showing how a relationship between them is becoming more like the granddaughter he never had. Nice story, though.