Reviews for COVERT ACTION - PART 1
Caren Rose chapter 1 . 10/5/2012
It was good, since you asked for feedback I would say that although I did read through all to the end I wasn't so hooked that I needed to know more.
Some of it seemed a little forced, especially when the ship's remains are left behind. That mystery is solved so quickly that it seems they didn't have to do much ...
Also the end part where they put themselves into this battle with the FD ..
Idk, it seemed confusing and also forced ... As in, this huge ship could have destroyed them or just hidden, but instead they were crippled by a series of technical difficulties, where there could have been a big mystery for the lexington to follow after.