Reviews for Becoming Woman
redquasar chapter 8 . 2/9/2014
More please! I really like both Michiru and Haruka in this and I'm really enjoying this story.
BG chapter 8 . 2/4/2014
Great update, glad to see the story hasn't died!
XxKyeru-TanadaxX chapter 8 . 1/10/2014
very interesting! Keep up the work
DCouran chapter 8 . 12/4/2013
Isa pa! Isa pang chapter! :P
Holy smokes! The suspense. The tension. The romance. Help me survive the wait. I can't even...
I don't know what to do with myself. I'm supposed to be studying but I'm too pumped up by your story that I can't focus! If I fail, it's your fault! Hahaha.
Awesome job! Palakpakan! :)
hunter007 chapter 8 . 12/3/2013
It's official: Michiru Kaioh has fallen in love with Haruka Tenoh in this chapter. The evidences are quite obvious. Good job. I also like how you mix the story with the Sailor Moon universe. Looking forward to the next chapter. Hopefully soon!
Alexia chapter 8 . 12/3/2013
I like so much the chapter no matter if I wait to much for that...good stuff take time, but also I must say that was to much about Carl. Is a good men but I don't accept that Michiru fall for someone else bit no Haruka. About Haruka she take shoo easy all the situation, what she feel for Michi and who is Asami?
I cannot wait for read the next chapter, take care of yourself bye
petiyaka chapter 8 . 12/3/2013
Michiru watching It was so funny to imagine her all red because of some crude sex scenery on internet.
So which way will she go? Carl? Or Haruka? Carl is a cook,good point for him. My girlfriend loves my cooking. (a good point for me, too ;)).
Haruka is just incredibly sexy and nice and sexy and attractive,...Just herself.

If Michiru was to choose from a rationnal point of vue, i would say Carl. But since love is everything from rationnal (that's so right!), it should be Haruka. Even if Rika had her first. (Michiru won't like it).

It is funny, i was thinking about you yesterday and was wondering if you would show sign of life. And this morning, i had this faboulous surprise. Thanks a lot. And don't give up.
Your fic is so good and and full of nice spirit and love. (sounding like santa claus now...)

Maybe should i think about you more often ;)
Till then, take care!
Viento-cortante chapter 8 . 12/2/2013
I'll be honest. When I read the title, I could not remember who was that guy. On purpose, has spent much time since the last time. I thought you abandoned this story.

Well, then check the previous chapter and vuala! I know who is. All my excitement went through a tube. Like I was looking for something about Haruka. Do not get me wrong, but I am interested to read about Michiru and Carl.

I felt sorry for not reading what I wanted, but hey, continue and I had a feeling of emptiness as for that kiss and I did not like. Apparently Michiru starts to like the man. And it frustrated me that.

In the end, Haruka did not budge. She even told me to give him an opportunity to Carl. Oh please!

I'm sad about it. Well, Asami goes to Osaka with Haru, then Michiru will know Asami? OMG!

Now, just waiting for the next chapter I will continue. Just because you are very good at writing and your story attracts me. XD

Thanks for coming back. I'll wait. XD
kae011 chapter 7 . 8/6/2013
kabayan! pls update soon!
Guest chapter 7 . 7/20/2013
This story is amazing and I hope you continue on with it. Also there were and are a lot of great writers that have never attended school. So don't give up.
imjce chapter 7 . 7/17/2013
Michiru was crying. She was fragile & in Haruka's arms...really?! You left it there like that?! Oh common! Do you hear that?! It's the sounding 70's porn music not being played. Sex in the office. What more can you ask for!

Rika & Haruka. She's cousins with Michiru so it's wrong, but then again, she's naked in the shower, so you get a get out of jail free card. It's in the rule book. It clearly states if a naked girl is in the shower with you, you can do it, no repercussions. It's like leaving the toilet seat down, punch buggy no punch back, tag no tag backs; it's the rule of the land.
imjce chapter 6 . 7/17/2013
I didn't know high schools were so open & accepting of same sex relationships. I only wished that was the case. Instead, they bully, taunt, tease & isolate you. It's unfortunate.

High school reunion is still a no good for me. It's only been 9 yrs since I graduated. Plus, there's Facebook & twitter for that now.

Goodbye kiss? That's foreplay. Do it. Just do it!

imjce chapter 5 . 7/17/2013
High school reunion.

Dating. Affair.

Feeding in public. Obvious.

Ex-girlfriend. Drifted apart.

Relationship commencement. Begins...3...2...1...!

PS: gung ho? Are you English? Cause that's the Queen's English, more specifically, UK. I'm chuffed to bits if you are English. We can now chin wag cause we use familiar terms. Lavatory? British way of saying bathroom. I'm not from the UK, my country is a Commonwealth. Give you a hint: maple syrup, beaver, universal healthcare, Wayne Gretzky.
imjce chapter 4 . 7/17/2013

I made a music video like Haruka. Same intimate movements, all suggestive & teasing. Except there was no music, people were naked, no dancing, and cameras, a lot of cameras. Holy crap! I might have starred in a porno...!

Michiru's bra flying off, exposing her chest?! Overload! But yes, quite embarrassing. Haruka didn't want other people seeing Michiru's goods, they're for her eyes only.

Riku talking bout going gay & turning gay? Yes. Some girls do, but they also go back to guys just as quickly. They're what we refer to as hasbians. Michiru on the other hand is gay. She just doesn't know it yet. Michiru needs Haruka to show her her gayness...with her tongue.
imjce chapter 3 . 7/17/2013
My eyes are drooping. I think I'm stroking. But, must...finish review!

I love a woman in a suit. It's sexy. Just the perfect mixture of feminine & masculinity mixed into one. I always imagine Michiru being super sexy in a form fitting suit with her hair down.

Aunt Miho. Don't you just love it when they straightforward ask you how much you make? It's the best. Sarcasm? Hell yeah. Just because you make tonnes of money does not equate to being a good person. A loving, caring person is always more preferred in my books than a jack-a-s-s that makes 100K a year.

I love Haruka's confidence. Yeah. I make this much, this much, so? Not too many people have the balls to do that, I admire her confidence. But something tells me she's super, uber rich. Bill Gates rich.

High school reunion? I'll pass too. Just a bunch of arseholes comparing jobs, how much they make, and whose life is better. Haruka is right. My high school? You're pretty successful if you don't end up a drug dealer. What? Am I joking...? Yes...I'm joking...not!
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