|Reviews for Becoming Woman|
| pewpewmew chapter 3 . 10/28/2012
Of course, I will continue to read and follow this one, it's an awesomesauce story ya'know and I luff it! :] oyeah, I think I read that from some *cough*ecchi*cough* manga before xD
Back to my review..
Wow, Miho is too harsh and bluntly inconsiderate tsk tsk good thing Haruka was able to calmly handle herself throughout the dinner, if I was in her position I already walked out of that resto (I don't have enough patience for that kind of people ._.) Rika on the other hand is her complete opposite. I like her lively character. I think she will be a lot of fun to have around Haruka & Michiru, a 'third party' maybe? xD would love to see her more on the future chappies :) Back to the parents..there's really something fishy going on between Haru and them hmmm I can sense it haha
I have a feeling that Michiru is starting to get interested and slowly falling in love with Haruka based on her actions throughout the chapter although she's still in denial. Getting comfortable around Haru and slowly opening herself is a baby step, right? or is it just me thinking that way?heheh oh and the reunion & the mystery caller I think I know where the story is going, but I'll keep it to myself first and we'll see if I'll hit the 'jackpot' or not xD
Awesome chapter, as usual ('nuff said) the plot, drama, grammar, theme..everything is flawlessly written. I definitely enjoyed reading it. Good job! *two thumbs up* oh and please update fast, the story is getting pretty interesting! :D (sorry for my lengthy review/comment)
| papapapuffy chapter 3 . 10/28/2012
Good chapter. I can't wait till Michiru realizes that Haruka's the perfect woman for her :) Update soon!
| James Birdsong chapter 3 . 10/28/2012
Awesome three chapters
| Hunter007 chapter 3 . 10/28/2012
Great chapter you got there! Somehow I have the feeling hat Haruka is not what she seems to be. I'm curios about what will happen next. Keep up the good work will ya.
| Electra Red chapter 3 . 10/28/2012
Ooh boy haruka tenoh falling prey to michirus charms:3 or perhaps the other way round!? Haha such a great chapter! A kiss on the cheek ooooh we are making progress. Yeeeesss. Anyways soon and thanks for updating! We will you round! :D
| ladyYamato09 chapter 1 . 10/28/2012
omg! didn't expect that coming! make Haruka SINGLE! ok maybe i'm over reacting...haha anyway update soon! i want to know what will rika do to get haruka's attention.,rivalry with cousins XD UPDATE! PLSSSSSSSSSS
| Newt Salamander chapter 3 . 10/28/2012
Yey! I'm so glad for this update Gen. This totally made my day. I have my hunches regarding Ruka's past. I'll email you about it.
| Uli chapter 3 . 10/28/2012
I have three you get 10 dog (fingers includes dews) and another 10 plus 3 (One dog has dews in the back with one back paw that has a double dew) so all in all you get 23 thumbs fingers dews not too sure how to sum this all up actually so this is the best I can do with how tired I am right now you be posting soon again this week?I would like to know what will happen during Rikas shoot with Haruka.
| xXxsailorFanxXx chapter 3 . 10/28/2012
just tell that the call is from haruka's mom? please tell me she is not married, else how is going to work with michiru?...
when she was about to say her relationship status, she got interrupted sooo i suppose that is going to be a really surprise for all of us eh? until you update i will repeat "not married" "not married" "not married" "not marrieeeeeed"
| jadedlilgirl chapter 3 . 10/27/2012
Oh no, just highly caffeinated. Haha. And its not that the story is predictable. Not at all. I'm pretty sure its going to be even more complicated, that I wouldnt be able to guess. And I like the fact that Haruka is so visually appealing. Rika has the hots for her :) I love rivalries :D
| Icy-Windbreeze chapter 3 . 10/27/2012
So much that we still don't know. Great chapter!
| idledmind chapter 2 . 10/20/2012
What? What's going on? Haruka's a double agent? This is getting good. Update soon!
| idledmind chapter 1 . 10/20/2012
I lol'd at Haruka's reaction and their morse code. Nice!
| shinoh chapter 2 . 10/17/2012
Michiru's parents are awesome! They do throw Michiru to a lion's den tho'. I hope they don't regret their decision later if Michiru really falls for Haruka. *smirk*
| shad chapter 2 . 10/15/2012
this chapter brings to mind the saying: turnabout is fair play. i wasn't expecting that twist at all. for her parents and haruka to be in on the lie and continuing for their own reasons brings up so many options for the course of the story. i won't sit and ponder them all now or i'd be lost in my thoughts for quite some time. i'm not going to try and guess at what will happen cause i enjoy your surprises. i look forward to seeing where your path leads. laters.