Reviews for Pain and Deception
JF2747 chapter 5 . 3/15/2013
Keep up the good work!
Guest chapter 5 . 3/13/2013
Loved this story please write more!
V. L. Crawford chapter 5 . 2/2/2013
This was great but to short and I want more.
V. L. Crawford chapter 4 . 2/2/2013
Thank Merlin he got there in time.
V. L. Crawford chapter 3 . 2/2/2013
I hate cliffies.
V. L. Crawford chapter 2 . 2/2/2013
Bad boy Neal!
V. L. Crawford chapter 1 . 2/2/2013
Great start.
ajota08 chapter 5 . 1/8/2013
Hi! Good story!I enjoy it so much! I hope sequels... :-D. Marta.
peppe1951 chapter 5 . 12/12/2012
I enjoyed it...write Nother
peppe1951 chapter 4 . 12/12/2012
exciting...glad that Peter got there before the anklet was found and destroyed
peppe1951 chapter 3 . 12/12/2012
Neal should have told Peter from the moment he got the text
peppe1951 chapter 2 . 12/12/2012
of course I'll stay tuned...this one is getting very interesting
peppe1951 chapter 1 . 12/12/2012
Neal should have come clean to Peter, who would have protected him
5-STAR chapter 5 . 11/30/2012
Great story! Loved awesome daddy Peter!
Squee-bunny chapter 5 . 11/29/2012
Yes, write a sequel! _ This fic has been a great read, overall, and this last chapter was especially cute. I would love to see any continuation, with Neal calling Peter 'Dad' and all :) Who can resist? And I love that you've made Peter so affectionate and open with his paternal feelings!

I hope you find the time to write much more!
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