Reviews for The New Member of the Force
CauseOfDeathLover13 chapter 7 . 1/20/2013
That was so cool!I was considering doing that in my story but I couldn't figure out how!It was really neat and not confusing at all...same as the game,I died in my choice the first time hehe :)
mozzi-girl chapter 5 . 11/24/2012
Much better, you're welcome with the advice! It's an awesome improvement :)

- Molly
Mozzi-Girl chapter 4 . 11/4/2012
Hey, my advice to you is to go and plan the rest of this story chapter-by-chapter, or to restart if you're not happy. Never dive into a story without knowing the killer and details sweetie, you'll just end up lost. Good luck. Need help, feel free to PM me or you can reach me on my Tumblr which is still mozzi-girl

- Molly
Mozzi-Girl chapter 3 . 10/21/2012
Awww, that was cute! And Dammit Mal, I got a feelings it's in the yearbook ;)
Hmm... Interesting idea to give us choices, I'll go with A.

- Molly
bugreid chapter 3 . 10/20/2012
Um! Ummm! I don't know what to pick! D: Whichever is funnier? So.. B. No! A! No.. B. I'm going with B. ...I think. :}

Cute chapter by the way! Adorable! Love how Natara was the "dog" and chased after the ball. XD
Mozzi-Girl chapter 2 . 10/8/2012
Hehe aww that was cute, and Kai's brilliant

- Molly
The Sarcastic Polar Bear chapter 1 . 10/2/2012
Oh my gosh! So cute! Mal and a puppy equals sweetness! :)
mozzi-girl chapter 1 . 9/30/2012
Hey, Welcome to CoD Fanfiction! We love new writers :)
This was really sweet and awesome, I loved it!

- Molly