|Reviews for Peregrine|
| Raging Dreams and Nightmares chapter 26 . 2/17/2013
Yay who doesnt like an aroused shessomaru ;) keep up the great work
| Taboo22 chapter 26 . 2/16/2013
Great chapter! Keep writing!
| Guest chapter 26 . 2/16/2013
| Lemrinth chapter 26 . 2/16/2013
Hahahahahaha! Is he really surrendering to his feelings?
| Youikina chapter 26 . 2/16/2013
Update! Please update! I can't wait to see what happens next!
| itachisgurl93 chapter 26 . 2/16/2013
hold up...sesshy is seme in this relationship right...cuz no matter how pretty he is..harry...must be on bottom no? lol! thx for the update!
| Hi Pot And News chapter 25 . 2/16/2013
Jealous Sesshoumaru is oddly endearing.
| Firehedgehog chapter 25 . 2/16/2013
heh heh heh
| xXxOtAkU-444xXx chapter 25 . 2/16/2013
I like ti!
| Dishon chapter 4 . 2/16/2013
I really like your story or rather what I read of it until now, but all this japanese you throw in is really disruptive and on it's way to almost annoying. I don't know any japanese except for the basic phrases or honorifics and always scrolling down to the bottom to just scroll up messes with the flow of the story.
Maybe you could just use italics or another way to mark these sentences so the reader knows Harry isn't able to understand it. Or another option would be to place the translation in brackets after the japanese, so the scrolling wouldn't be a problem anymore.
Like I said, I like this fic; your grammar is ok as is your spelling and the concept sounds intriguing, but I can't enyoy reading something, when I'm always thrown out of the flow when I can't understand what's been said. I also don't think I'm the only one, so you could do a lot of your (potential) readers a favour if you'd work on that :)
| Taboo22 chapter 25 . 2/16/2013
| itachisgurl93 chapter 25 . 2/16/2013
oh touga...what to do with you! lol! thx for the update!
| Raging Dreams and Nightmares chapter 25 . 2/16/2013
Yay a story got updated. Great chapter who doesnt like an angry shessomaru
| EmeraldEyed chapter 25 . 2/15/2013
Huzzah for updates!
| Sweet Moments chapter 25 . 2/15/2013
I love when parents troll their children, it always makes me giggle. I think it's so cute that Touga was willing to stab himself to get Harry to fall into his plot. Too bad Sesshomaru doesn't realize how much his papa loves him.