Reviews for Children of the Spiral
martin.tyler.16 chapter 4 . 2/27
Hey man, this story's awesome! Plz don't abandon it. Update soon plz!
DOCTORWHO1267 chapter 1 . 2/13
KAKASHI gave naruto a freakin condom lmfao
kazuki2292 chapter 4 . 12/27/2014
Next chapter please
Kairan1979 chapter 4 . 12/6/2014
It's always nice to see the stories where Naruto gets a proper sensei.
Though I'm unhappy at the thought of him dating Mito. It's just too creepy.
Dragon Blaze-X chapter 4 . 11/14/2014
dammmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm Naruto is officaly the Howling mad bomer of the Leaf
Dragon Blaze-X chapter 3 . 11/14/2014
really what is i with every Uzumaki women in fics being more sadistic than anko
Dragon Blaze-X chapter 2 . 11/14/2014
dude it fucken was funny as god dam hell
ExodiaGeass8910 chapter 4 . 11/3/2014
I hope you have TenTen be Narutos' BEST customer for the Uzumaki Shuriken -should he choose to sell it. I hope to see this updated soon.
Biblio388 chapter 4 . 11/2/2014
Haven't seen Neji handled like that before and after reading this I am kind of sad about that because it was awesome. Great story and I hope to see it continued some day.
Biblio388 chapter 2 . 11/2/2014
That TOBI thing is brilliant. Just the name makes me laugh but now every time I read Tobi in this series I will be thinking about that orange glove and what would change if it existed in whichever story I am currently reading. Enjoying this story and think I will look into the others by this author if I have the time.
ViciousFitz chapter 4 . 8/3/2014
What?! Where's the rest? This is a great fanfic, and it's funny as hell. WHY YOU STOP WRITING?!
D.J. Scales chapter 4 . 7/17/2014
Okay I love the Omake.
Unknown2112015 chapter 4 . 7/16/2014
LMFAO, The omake on this one was something else. Man, I have to say this was interesting. I can not wait for the next chapter.
frytrix chapter 4 . 6/28/2014
I really enjoy reading the story, please update soon.
sanabalis chapter 4 . 6/28/2014
LOL! Excellent story!
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