Reviews for Father of Demi-gods |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Please continue this story! It’s freaking awesome! |
![]() ![]() ![]() how are you gonna piss me off to the point of dropping a story at chapter 2?! Athena sleeps with Naruto first, then removes his memories of her. then Artemis sleeps with him after he had his memories of athena removed. then she removes his memories of HER. THEN you try and pull some stupid ass "you're a two timer who cheated on us. we dont know if we can ever trust you again" shit. did you forget that you wrote them both removing his memories of them?! |
![]() ![]() ![]() gawd the chains are named Kōngo Fusa not kusari or whatever. i'm sorry but this is bugging me |
![]() ![]() ![]() Really, really unique premise, but the pacing is inconsistent and the timeline is scattered all over the place. Would make it a more pleasant read if these issues were addressed. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wish there was more |
![]() ![]() ![]() "He had a duty to perform, and he did what was necessary. At least he left a legacy on that world" once again a random line in the middle of the chapter is throwing me off. So apparently Naruto has multiple kids with random women but just didn't like Hinata enough to give her a kid it seems. Honestly these lines don't belong |
![]() ![]() ![]() The 1st chapter is good but that random Hinata bash in the middle really threw me off. Naruto saying she can't stand beside him, she doesn't love him just admire, she'd be a bad wife if he was hokage, etc Like what?! None of that at all is slightly true and is weird to add in |
![]() ![]() ![]() would you consider doing a reading fic for this story |
![]() ![]() ![]() could you add calypso |
![]() ![]() ![]() I don’t get how this fic is so popular the characters portrayed here are definitely not the originals and are disgraces. Two virgin godesses throwing themselves onto someone. Yeah thanks but No. |
![]() ![]() ![]() update soon plz |
![]() ![]() ![]() Continue |
![]() ![]() ![]() Also, you sound like an idiot on the whole Hinata thing given the fact that it's completely false. I was actually looking forward to reading this and it's just unreadable |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yeah you should've done some research instead of writing Athena like Aphrodite. This just sounds unlogical cuz she's a VIRGIN goddess! |
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