Reviews for Father of Demi-gods
AshesGleamandGlow chapter 7 . 8/1
This has been a fun read. I look forward to reading more if you ever get around to it!
Guest chapter 2 . 7/4
Naruto is Best Dad Ever and his ever increasing collection of kids are vicious in their defense of him from the hussies of the world. XD But there's always room for outtakes and omakes of scenes-that-never-happened including pairing him with other people... *cackles*
radeklegia chapter 7 . 6/26
i hope you can continue this... this story has potential, it's been a long time but still i'm going to follow this and hope it will be updated. Peace
Goose Attack chapter 2 . 5/30
Yeah, neither Artemis or Athena have any room to be angry with him about having a child with both of them. All Artemis was was a rival. It was Athena making him forget everything about her, so that when Artemis made her request, the only hesitation he had was that it was so sudden. Athena doesn't really have any right to be angry that he hooked up with someone else, when she was the one to mind rape him to hell and back to make sure he forgot her. Artemis has no reason to be angry because, one, he doesn't remember Athena, and two, he never really considered her a potential lover. It just feels like you wanted to play into the "angry woman, cowering guy" cliche. Also, both Athena and Artemis seemed way too eager to break their vows of virginity.
mattywilkss chapter 3 . 5/23
i think that its fairly obvious that you've never been in a fight in your life. when you are surrounded you absolutely do not have time to have a conversation with a couple of people.
Ender the multiverse Detective chapter 7 . 5/2
veryg good
TomasDark chapter 7 . 4/22
Fucking awesome!
helkil chapter 7 . 4/10
I hope you get better it was fun and I would love more
Cookie16Monster chapter 7 . 4/7
miss reading your writings and I've read this story like 8 or 9 time its awesome hope you get back into writing.
Shiro981 chapter 2 . 4/6
really your fic is awesome please more chapters
Zekrob chapter 2 . 3/27
The Kindly Ones is the name for the Furies and the Furies ONLY, it seems like you used it for demons/monsters in general here
GentlestCobra2 chapter 7 . 3/25
Great make more chapters
DeathCrawler chapter 7 . 3/16
Hopefully this will be updated one day again
Darksnider05 chapter 5 . 3/12
Naruto couldn't of just tree hopped them through that forest?
Darksnider05 chapter 3 . 3/12
How are they doing anything to monsters without Celestial Bronze.
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