|Reviews for Sweet Nothings|
| CrypticButterfly chapter 1 . 10/8/2013
I'm not exactly the best at writing proper reviews, but I'd figured I'd give it a shot for this fic.
So. This was expertly written, right off the bat. I loved the imagery, especially the parts about those delicious sounding cookies. Honestly, I could imagine every detail so brilliantly.
You are fantastic! Had me cooing at the boys and craving sweets the entire time. I enjoyed this litle fic the whole way through. Brilliant!
Thank-you for writing it! Wish again I could leave a better review. Take care!
| Caeria chapter 1 . 4/20/2013
Nicely done. Enjoyed the memories of childhood presented in the story
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/22/2012
Your story is well written, warm, and filled with tenderness. Enjoyed it very much.
| NightScriber chapter 1 . 10/18/2012
Thanks so much for your reviews - glad you enjoyed reading! Hope to post more ASJ fics before too long.
| InsideOutlaw chapter 1 . 10/7/2012
Great first ASJ story. Very well written and you portrayed a loving relationship in a caring and understated way. Nice work!
| Lana Coombe chapter 1 . 10/6/2012
Aww bless! Nicely written. You captured their individual characters well and kept the story going at a good pace, making for a very enjoyable read. Thanks.
| Ghislaine Emrys chapter 1 . 10/5/2012
Hard to believe this is your first ASJ story-it's great! You've got the characters down well, the plot is realistic, and the slash aspect is believable. I really liked Kid's memory of his childhood birthday and that Heyes knew exactly how to make him feel better. Looking forward to reading more from you!
| Friscogirl chapter 1 . 10/1/2012
I loved this! The gentleness of their relationship and the intertwining of dreams of cookies to the real deal! Thanks
| RosieAnnie chapter 1 . 10/1/2012
Slash is not my favorite category, but I thought you handled this with sensitivity and grace. Your writing shows a facility for language, plot and characterization. I look forward to reading your next stories.
| Anon chapter 1 . 10/1/2012
Congratulations! Well done!
That is so sweet - and even calorie-free (only leaves me with a craving for cookies...)