|Reviews for My Daughter Alex|
| lilypup chapter 3 . 10/12/2012
the whole thing feels awkward great story but it seem like you can not decide on a point of view but it is your first it just need some work on the awkwardness
| Kate L chapter 3 . 10/6/2012
so far i really like the story!
i found a couple mistakes, you might wont to go over again to fix those
show don't tell- more deal enplane what happens rather than just saying it happens
cant wait till you upload again!