Reviews for What An Excellent Plan
blkhrts chapter 22 . 12/15/2020
plz update
RitzyKitsune chapter 13 . 10/2/2020
Umhum now she understands what Sakura went through with Lee heheheheh
Guest chapter 22 . 8/23/2020
I saw that this was discontinued and decided to read it anyway. I loved the story, like I do all your stories that I've read so far, and if the slim chance you ever decide to continue or reboot this story you have a fan in me.
Animeteaspill chapter 22 . 7/20/2020
I really liked this story and whished you continued but its okay ꉕbecause you probably had a reason or was stressed๑ or something so its your choice. ヅ﹏
HEART BEATZ 24'7 chapter 22 . 6/12/2020
Please don't abandon this story... I really love it! It's really exciting!
aGnamZer0 chapter 12 . 5/18/2020
Ahah, good Obito, training is more important than Rin. Training is what will keep you and your teammates alive. Training is what will make you closer of your dream of Hokage (or at least of helping Hokage Naruto). Training will never betray you. I'm proud of you !
aGnamZer0 chapter 10 . 5/18/2020
Well, about the attack on Konoha, though I'm like Naruto and I didn't listen Iruka-sensei's lesson, I'm pretty sure it didn't happen in the original timeline. But then again, she did make great changes, the most prominent one for now being saving Sakumo.

However, I don't see what she finds 'wrong' about Kakashi. I wonder...
aGnamZer0 chapter 9 . 5/18/2020
Yeah, I pretty much agree with you. I hate Sakura but I do like Rin. However, in the context, and the 'mission' Naruto decided to take, I find it indeed better if she were to stay aside.
aGnamZer0 chapter 8 . 5/18/2020
She will become a problem that Rin...
aGnamZer0 chapter 7 . 5/18/2020
Arara, even Fugaku accepted Naruto ! He doesn't mind, or maybe he even approves of her passing time with the new Uchiha generation, well "as long as they didn't start wearing orange". That one killed me ! XD
aGnamZer0 chapter 5 . 5/18/2020
I don't know if any of you noticed, but at the end of the chapter, Obito hoped that "maybe, just maybe, Naruto would let him help her out" towards her big goal of peace. That also means, even if I don't think he noticed it himself, that he changed his goal from 'becoming hokage' to 'help Naruto when she'll become Hokage'. I really like your fic, the character development if fascinating.
aGnamZer0 chapter 2 . 5/18/2020
Ah, it was so cute ! My sweet little Obito beeing fed. Naruto x Obito has always being my favorite pairing (with Obito being my favorite character and Naruto my third favorite). I really want to see how it will develop.
Forever In Oblivion chapter 1 . 4/28/2020
NOOOO I LOVED THIS STORY ;-;
ChaoticInscriber chapter 22 . 3/3/2020
I wonder if they can get bonus points for capturing a whole team, or if the captured team just gets in more trouble afterwards for falling so easily so fast?
Of course, that depends on being able to get their captives back to the tower unscathed without anyone getting in the way enough to be a Problem. It's not like most teams, where they have to worry about being able to carry multiple captives while still being able to fight - they have the only one-kunoichi-army that is literally an army of herself if she wants, rather than being able to decimate one. Naru-clones can easily manage hauling captives and if they wake up and manage something sneaky at worst they pop and said captives have a nastier fall than expected, before being recaptured.

Maybe a fun omake would be their team showing up at the Tower slightly bedraggled for everyone else's efforts to waylay them, but with half the other Chunin hopefuls in tow as captives. Taking advantage of the endless extra hands to haul them about, they decided to be a little bit petty and vengeful, capturing everyone who tried to capture them or interfere with their captives along the way. XD I can see any of the trio going along with such a thing with the right missteps by the rest, especially once they explain Naruto's lack of limits on the clones to Rin well enough her budding-medic instincts settle down from the twitching about how hazardous that has to be to anyone else's health.

Ah well, all's well that ends well. See you in another fic!
Stellarwitch chapter 22 . 3/1/2020
I really enjoyed this story and how well you introduced characters! I thought Gai’s infatuation was hilarious. Thank you!
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