Reviews for What An Excellent Plan
Peyton Namikaze chapter 2 . 11/3/2012
its a nice story. i love it! when are you going to update the next chapter! i'm eagerly waiting for itg :)
Eternal Cat Moon chapter 2 . 11/2/2012
I love where this is going!
Update soon!
Eternal Cat Moon
BoomboomPOWWWW chapter 2 . 11/2/2012
Wow! I really love this concept, great job with the beginning! There could be a question mark in the summary though, instead of a period.
Malisuco chapter 2 . 11/2/2012
Wait a minute... In the AN at the end, you just said that your main character is a dead last dumbass who can't think...

Ah well, I'm outta here.
Malisuco chapter 1 . 11/2/2012
Sigh... Whenever Naruto says 'lets train together', it usually means 'come by later so I can teach you all sorts of techniques I worked hard for' and 'I feel really powerful even though I'm really not so lets power YOU up as well for no reason!'.

Seriously...

And a fem-Naruto that resembles a boy is plain wierd. A girl is a girl, a boy is a boy. A manly girl isn't exactly appealing, you know. Why bother writing fem-Naru if its going to be manly anyway
Cold Colors chapter 2 . 10/28/2012
I like where this is going! :D

-Cold
andReiki chapter 2 . 10/27/2012
I like where this story is going quite much. Please continue..
shadowmarialove chapter 1 . 10/25/2012
I really like this story!
Mi-chan Kizanami chapter 2 . 10/25/2012
Ahaha so cute!.. I guess naruto just see herself in obito and because of her empathy as she understand obito feeling.. Seeing that she had experiance it herself.. She was an outcast to the entire village while obito is being a blacksheep.. An outcast even to his own family.. So being the person she is she couldn't help but lend a helping hand, since she knows how painful it was being outcast and she was once in his exect position and no one lend a helping hand to her.. (it been that way her whole life until iruka lend a helping hand and she had a friend in team7).. It sound to me like naruto was here in the past by accident.. How did she manage to explaine this to the hokage and did jiraiya knows?.. As for kakashi either he finding naruto weird but interesting girl or he start to remember the future (it work both way).. As for naruto plan.. Maybe she try to prevent obito 'death' (since that way he couldn't meet madara) and prevent him from falling for rin (as that the reason why he become like in canon).. With someone like naruto maybe she trying to be his friend too?
This is naruto afterall her action is base from her heart, feeling and moral.. As her nindo is to choose a path without regret.. If she kill a person that act just like her and in a familiar situation just like her.. A person that had yet to do anything bad.. she'll regret it.. So maybe she just thought to change his past so he won't become a bad guy in the future and she could save him if she become his friend?
Mi-chan Kizanami chapter 1 . 10/25/2012
I generally love timetravel story and your plotline are very original, And just a bit of naruto appearance and I can see that dispite being a girl naruto is still 'naruto' and your writing stlye are also pretty neat and obito.. I find his situation in canon really sad.. So I hope this time he can finally have a happy ending.. Since naruto is really loyal and unbelievable understanding type of person.. Though I do wonder how did she manage to come in the past and in a child form no less?
Dead FanfictionDotNetAccount chapter 2 . 10/21/2012
No Prob. anytime btw if you want some tips so you're not stumped (not that I'm insulting ya, just giving helpful advice) I'll be there to give 'em freely, it's what I do :D
Guest chapter 2 . 10/20/2012
keep the chapters coming
My Secret chapter 2 . 10/20/2012
Ero-sensei? Does this mean jiraya is in the past too or at least know about her from being the future? I'm so curious! Update soon!
Kotomine 'The God' Shirou chapter 2 . 10/20/2012
I thought Kakashi passed since he was 5 but never mind that but is Kakashi gonna fall for naruto too or is this gonna be love triangle or 3P but it has potential indeed it inspire some idea for me and I just can't wait to see next chapter so update soon Tsume-sama
Animefreak Amii chapter 2 . 10/19/2012
Love it! :)
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