Reviews for Anachrophobia
Wednesday chapter 1 . 10/5/2012
Very moving. Not only all the moments you mentioned, but also the memoires of the years Peter lived in and he lost Olivia to Walternate in the alternate future.
Well written and heart breakingly beautiful.
Cerulean.Phoenix7 chapter 1 . 9/30/2012
This piece is short yet strong, reminding all of us of why time is such a valuable ally - and a devious trickster. Peter has learned not to trust time, and the repercussions of that are evident throughout the show, and gathered nicely here.

The image of a universe or timeline moving on without Peter is rather haunting; it's as if this metaphysical body just up and left in oblivion. Now there is a scary thought/

The notion that perhaps Peter's trouble with time will end with the next grave he fills is a morbid one, but considering the events of the past seasons, I cannot help but wonder if there is some truth to it.

Well done.

CP7
Guest chapter 1 . 9/30/2012
Oh wow... 248 words and the pain they brought... and some joy.

Okay the picture of the dog... *shudder* very disturbing. and a tiny bit cute.
Dixiegirl256 chapter 1 . 9/30/2012
Love this. A perfect snapshot of a moment in time.

And don't you just love it when a story just HAS to be written?

Well done!