|Reviews for Raised by Darkness|
| Therio chapter 55 . 3/2
Wow, a long and great story. I loved reading every minute of it. Thanks for sharing.
| Guest chapter 6 . 2/23
Flitwick should ask to borrow Plank
| Zoe Starlit chapter 2 . 2/21
This story is sorta good. You seem to have a problem with grammar, punctuation, and capitalization. You should really get a Beta. I can't do it because I don't have the time, patience, or focusing skills to do it. Well actually that's a lie. I simply don't want or know how to write a one-shot with the necessary requirements. But you should really get one, or at the very least go back and correct the mistakes from the beginning. I'm not trying to be mean, it's just a . . . I can't figure out the word, sorry. Like a helpful review. A not negative critizism. A positive comment or something like that. I just had one of my biggest brain farts ever. So disappointing.
| Spirit Skysong chapter 27 . 2/20
I'm guessing that our esteemed, black-cloaked Order of the Phoenix leader is Grindlewald.
(I just finished chapter 26)
| ShadowWarrior11 chapter 55 . 2/14
This is a great story! Great ending, too!
Have you ever watched the cartoon "Hulk"? There was one made in the '90s which has the same basic plot, with Banner changing to Hulk to take down Ross but he goes out of control, only for his girl to calm him down
I'm not accusing you of plagerizing, just wondering if you had seen it since... Well y'know why. And now I'm rambling.
Great story still! It took me nearly five hours total but i finished it!
| aiower chapter 3 . 2/11
| ShadowWarrior11 chapter 1 . 2/9
Dang, this is a great story and I'm only on chapter 1!
| Guest chapter 11 . 1/24
To answer Draco's question. Yes they do house a 50 foot snake. And sort of the giant spider is in the forbidden forest
| the curse chapter 55 . 1/23
sequel harry eas the rest of voldy
| Draxsiss chapter 40 . 1/19
the cloaked figure is Dumbledoors Lover, the dark lord that he defeated. Makes sense Genetics manipulation (Nazi Germany) and how he was always saying "the greater good" which was his favorite line, also Dumbeldoor would partner with no one whom he did not care for.
| Kidagirl8 chapter 1 . 1/16
oooh I wonder if harry will meet and talk to Sirius I hope he does!
| Shaydrall chapter 3 . 1/13
Thought I'd give it a shot, but not really my cup of tea. A bit too childish for my taste, though I suppose with him being a child there's no avoiding that. The idea behind the Dementors is fascinating, though I think it would have been far more interesting if the Dementors weren't basically humans who aren't really humans. I mean the first one is literally named Lucy and burst into the story with a saving Harry from the Dursley's cliche. You could pretty much replace them with anything and I don't feel much would change, so it falls quite short in that regard.
Perhaps if they couldn't communicate with Harry but protected him anyway for some strange reason. Something you could build a plot. And he learned to coexist with them, all while interacting with whatever Azkaban prisoners you'd like. That would be a very solid base and bring something new to the fic world that's for sure.
Anyway keep up the good work.
| PiptheSnake chapter 13 . 1/9
You have no clue how much I've fallen in love with this
| PiptheSnake chapter 11 . 1/9
Draco, Draco, you got it in one
| LoveUriah chapter 41 . 1/6
First this is not a review just something I want to say and my user is LoveUriah101 I just don't feel like login in. I've had this idea from the start that the person could be Voldie or someone of the like. Then again seeing as its a girl it could be Lily although now that theory has started to make less sense. Anyways that's all I wanted to say. I'll review at the end