|Reviews for Trying To Make Things Right|
| Aryanna chapter 1 . 3/29/2013
I loved it!
Plse update soon.
| cedes.trende chapter 1 . 11/12/2012
more more more more pleassseeee
| Princesa de la Luna chapter 1 . 10/18/2012
hi, interesting story and chapter. do you or your like to draw? can you please draw your OC and some scenes in the story? or make some banners please? also do you and your frineds friends like making videos on youtube dot com? if you have time can you or some of your friends please try to make a fanfic trailer of your story? please? YOU DON'T HAVE TO IF YOU DON'T WANT TO. is it a good or a bad idea?. with your permission may i please recommend some good manga/anime stories to read and review?. please keep on makeing the chapters as long as possible, in my opinion the longer a chapter is the better and i like reading long chapters. please update and good luck until chapter 2.
ps: do you like and know the manga/anime called vampire knight, blood plus, yugioh, digimon, mai hime [my-hime], bleach, death note, dragon ball z, fullmetal alchemist, naruto, fruits basket, fushigi yuugi, kuroshitsuji [black butler], ouran high school club, inuyasha, sailor moon, samurai deeper kyo, shaman king, wolf's rain, mobile suit gundam 00, mobile suit gundam seed, mobile suit gundam seed destiny, mobile suit gundam wing/ac, mobile fighter g-gundam, code geass lelouch of the rebellion, law of ueki, jyu Oh Sei, matantei loki ragnarok, peacemaker kurogane, saiyuki, princess tutu, beyblade, d n angel, durarara, full moon wo sagashite, gakuen alice, fafner in the azure [this has the same character designes as mobile suit gundam seed/destiny], inuyasha, zoids, pandora hearts, yu yu hakusho, prétear, romeo juliet, rurouni kenshin, shakugan no shana, black bird, shugo chara, tsubasa chronicle, mermaid melody pichi pichi pitch, xxxHOLiC, tenchi muyo, Yu-Gi-Oh GX, Yu-Gi-Oh! 5D's, Metal Fight Beyblade. gilgamesh, chrono crusade, card captor sakura, pokemon? if you don't know what these manga/anime are about please go to wikipedia dot org and wikia dot com
when you are searching a manga/anime on wikia dot com you should type it like this vampireknightdotwikiadotcom
| Frosty Wings chapter 1 . 10/12/2012
Seeing as that's the case, then why not store it in an external hard drive or pen drive? This really isn't the place to store unwanted space, you know.
| Demonic Vampriss chapter 1 . 10/11/2012
This is a realllllllyyyyy old story that I wrote and I only posted it on here so I can delete it off my computer. I've pretty much forgotten most of the characters in Blood but I just put it out there.
| U Cnt Hndl ME chapter 1 . 10/3/2012
Awww you finally posted it! I remember when you first wrote this one. Man makes me feel old... T_T We need to hang out soon girlie! Why are you posting something so old? Run out of ideas? haha. Do I need to come ...Inspire... you? hehe
| Frosty Wings chapter 1 . 10/3/2012
This story seems like a good concept with Solomon being paired with an OC as Saya never returned his feelings. However, you forget that Vampires and Chiropterans are the same species in Blood plus, only they aren't the traditional kind.
Also, your character being more powerful than the two Queens is kinda Mary-Sueish. Saya and Diva are the most powerful of their species as they possess the purest of blood than any other Chiropteran. Maybe if she was a Chevalier from the original Saya's sister or some other kind of Chiropteran (a clone or something), and not more powerful than the Queens, she would probably be better.
Your spelling and grammar also needs some work. Perhaps get a beta?
Anyway, this is just some constructive criticism and is not meant to be mean-spirited in any way. I want to see more Solomon/OC stories and I definitely want this one to succeed.