Reviews for Passover
emilyhotchner-olicity-bethyl chapter 1 . 11/30/2014
why is he leaving?
Amelie chapter 9 . 8/15/2014
Every single chapter was fabulous. This has helped me understand Tobias way better, and thanks so much for writing this!
Amelie chapter 6 . 8/15/2014
I am so loving this!
Amelie chapter 2 . 8/15/2014
This is amazing! Love how you expanded on how Tobias mentioned Tris to Shauna. Keep up the awesome writing!
101olive4u chapter 9 . 6/19/2014
OOOH! I love this story! So devastated that its ended!
101olive4u chapter 2 . 6/19/2014
Great chap! Hope there's more like it!
laser97 chapter 9 . 6/11/2014
Well-written! Love it!
scc318 chapter 1 . 5/13/2014
You have lovely style:)
Windchimed chapter 9 . 2/9/2014
Another great story - you have a lot of talent. You provided some great insights into Tobias' perspective in this version of "Divergent.". Thanks for sharing this!
Guest chapter 9 . 1/31/2014
C. R. Y. I. N. G.
Readforfun123 chapter 3 . 12/30/2013
I really like the story so far! But I feel like it's somewhat to sappy... But it's still good though!
Mindioneal chapter 9 . 12/8/2013
AWESOME story! I wish you wrote the real divergent. You hold not butchered it like Veronica did.
Mindioneal chapter 6 . 12/8/2013
Love this story so far! I feel like you wrote divergent & are writing this one from Tobias point of view.
aurora-inked chapter 8 . 10/17/2013
My absolute FAVOURITE chapter. I even got out my copy of Divergent to read alongside with this. Thank you.
GreenIsMyWarPaint chapter 9 . 10/6/2013
Aaaaaaahhhh! I love your stories. You have to write more of them. This was intense and I really wish that you had made the chapters longer!
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