|Reviews for Wedding Day|
| K chapter 3 . 9/3/2013
Cute could have done more though
| Awesom0Maximus chapter 3 . 6/21/2013
That was a GREAT story... i wish more were like it!
| Aubr chapter 3 . 11/5/2012
This whole story was beautiful, thank you!
| bookworm8721 chapter 1 . 10/2/2012
I liked what you did with this story. Great job. I think I blushed ;)
| Jade's One of a Kind chapter 3 . 10/2/2012
Huh, what a story! Too bad it ended rather quickly. Good job on the establishment of the lemon, my friend. It got me quite flushed a bit, Hehe.
Well, how about some constructive criticism? Now, I feel as though you could've inserted a lot more detail in the intimate scene, or even the whole story. Maybe that's the reason why it ended really quickly. This is a completed story, right? My apologies if it's not.
But yeah, furthermore, try to get deep into the character's thoughts and actions. Remember, those little relevant things can basically describe the entire character.
Sorry, my mind's stuck in English class.
But overall, good use of vocabulary and speech, and I can't wait for plenty more of your works. Keep it up, my friend!