weylon jones...killer croc...subtle.

So many villians! Woot! Continue!

HA! Bruce and Dick are so great. I can't wait to see how you pull off the adoption process.

Now that cliffhanger was just cruel...Update as soon as conceivably possible!

Oh my God! I'm in the middle of a dining room for class and I was like freaking out during this whole thing. My friends are like is something wrong with you?! This is by far my favorite chapter. I wanted to Chicago when it said Bruce was crying. So was Bruce imagining Barbara being dead because of Scarecrow's fear gas or is she really messed up? Oh well I guess I'll just have to wait. I'm still in aw!

I love this story. Your an amazing writer. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Oh. My. God. This was amazing and sad! I'm super sad that the death scene finally happened but finally seeing Slade made me freak out. I feel so bad for Dick.

I absolutely LOVE your series :) its just so much fun and I really like the way you write the characters, but I hope Babs and Bruce get together, I still love Dick and Babs relationship in the comics but I just feel she would be perfect for Bruce.

Aw. New friends. So sweet. Cool that you threw Grayson in there

this was nice. I actully feel for the graysons now.

this was an awesome chapter and bruce come on buddy you really didn't have to brush it off that quickly

Oh my gosh this was awesome! Oh and I know that venomous stare because I've given it to my friend before. I can't wait for what happens next!

who's this wilson guy?is it slade wilson aka the terminator aka deathstroke?anyway pretty good chapters especially chap 7 it was awesome.

Such a good chapter. I can't believe Montoya turned on Jim...awesome job as usual

You are SO GOOD at this! I admit that you could use a beta or something, but the amazing story more than makes up for it. I thought that Bruce wanting ice cream was a great way to show that he still is a kid. And DICK'S INTRO WAS SOOOOO PERFECT!
I will admit that Barbara being Batgirl doesn't appeal to me as much anymore, and I think it's because she doesn't have the athletic ability like she did in the comics. She had 3 martial arts training, ballet, and gymnastics to her name when she was introduced.
But this is your own story. And it is totally one of my favorites. I LOVE how much you've been updating the past few days.
You are an amazing writer! Keep it up!