huh, this is pretty good so far, I like it

You spelled pain wrong its pain not pain

lol wow.

*challenge accepted guy meme appears* CHALLENGE ACCEPTED

Oh Boy...

*Slience* Oh Carp, I need More Info

I'm just wondering, Is Zim going to Earth soon?

Yet another another awesome chapter! U so epic! Can't wait for the next chapter! :D

I bet someone's gonna SCREAMMM

Epic job! Poor Spork lol. Keep up the good work! :D

Oh, honey! This story amuses me. It actually made my night. Thank you for that!

Really good fic so far, great angle for a fic and way to keep it interesting. Great work!

That was AWESOME!

And that kids is why you always listen to your wife or pain and torture awaits I know from experience!

I really like the idea, but your format is all wrong! Start a new line when people are talking. Always. Also, you might want to start making paragraphs, no one likes to read fanfics that are jumbled together. Anyway, I think you should continue it, it's a great story, but please take my advice if you want to make it more popular. Maybe also change the summary to something a little more...not how it is. Suspenseful, is the word. People love suspense.