|Reviews for On The Pontoon|
| arses21 chapter 2 . 10/26/2014
Whoa! That was amazing! They are just so good together!
| Graveygraves chapter 2 . 12/2/2012
This was brilliant - as per usual. Sorry it has taken me so long to read it.
| B2G2 chapter 2 . 11/4/2012
Please, oh PLEASE keep it going! You write these two so perfectly. I've already found you on TWC and read them all there. Big fan here!
| lovinit chapter 2 . 10/16/2012
chapter three pretty please with cookies on top
| hifield chapter 2 . 10/15/2012
Well ... that was steamy and unlike any fishing trip I've ever been on! Well done.
| hifield chapter 1 . 10/15/2012
I love the way you write these two ... the non-stop head chatter is great. On to the next chapter.
| Fanatical Writer chapter 2 . 10/7/2012
Oh, my. I loved this. Every word of it. The part about her 'accidental exotic dancer moves' really cracked me up.
Excellent job, Kricket!
| Fanatical Writer chapter 1 . 10/7/2012
Oh, my. Excellent start. I absolutely adored this!
| Harleyzgirl chapter 2 . 10/6/2012
Holy Hannah! Here's your personal award for the hottest damned fishing trip in history. Wow! :)
| Harleyzgirl chapter 1 . 10/6/2012
Oh my indeed. Derek got his game on once he knew for certain Pen was free. What a high stakes, no holds barred claim. Love it. Super hot indeed.
| fairgirl chapter 2 . 10/5/2012
Wow...I never read about such a hot kiss. This was excellent, as always!
| kmn1829 chapter 2 . 10/5/2012
I wish you had written a chapter of what happens when they get home, but I loved this story. It was awesome and sweet to me. I loved the ending to this chapter. Great work. Cant wait for the next story or maybe a bonus chapter ;-)
| HGRHfan35 chapter 2 . 10/4/2012
This was SO wrong to read just before going to work!
Way too hot...
Thank you my dear Kricket. . .
| K-Essence chapter 2 . 10/3/2012
As always kricket this story is the perfect mix of sweet and fun.
| csimesser1 chapter 2 . 10/3/2012
omg loved it can't wait to read what happens next