Reviews for the Fall
lisamichelle17 chapter 11 . 10/14/2012
They are passionate and adorable. Even at 17 they are smart about protection and I can see them as parents when they are older.
obsmama chapter 10 . 10/14/2012
Omg you just nail teens seriously.
NPakus chapter 12 . 10/14/2012
Hee, hee! I enjoyed this! Will be looking forward to what you share next.
Clynne chapter 12 . 10/14/2012
Too funny! Had to have the pajama jeans to end it perfectly!
missyb617 chapter 12 . 10/14/2012
Loved this story! So sweet! Thanks for sharing this with us.
Linzzer220 chapter 12 . 10/14/2012
LMFAO! Great ending! I loved it! I mean of course I did, but that was cute xo
Linzzer220 chapter 11 . 10/14/2012
*sigh* oh young love-so precious, isn't it?
Linzzer220 chapter 10 . 10/14/2012
Twiggalina chapter 12 . 10/14/2012
Haha! Just what she always wanted:)
Great end to this cute story Rochelle!
Linzzer220 chapter 9 . 10/14/2012
Haha ugh children at that age are def annoying. But bribing does usually work-such simple creatures lol! ;)
ReaderCathy chapter 12 . 10/14/2012
This strony should be called 'Pajama jeans'! Omg. Can anyone give me these? :)
Amazing strory about difficulties of being teenager in relationship. Thankfully, they soled their problems.
Love it!
oontan chapter 12 . 10/14/2012
lolllll i googled what those pajama jeans looked like, and lawd, they are straight up hideous! lol edward's such a silly boy.
FictionFreak95 chapter 10 . 10/12/2012
Pajama jeans! *DED*

and omg what a boy! I died laughing through this one lady. Fantastic banter!
Cared chapter 12 . 10/14/2012
Lovely story, thanks. Is there really such a thing as pyjama jeans? Inquiring minds want to know LOL.
buffbronze chapter 12 . 10/14/2012
You always manage to touch my heart with your stories...this was a perfect little snapshot into two 17 year old's lives.
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